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Nov 11, 2005 22:42

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phoenixeiros November 13 2005, 23:46:17 UTC
Weee! I actually like the interactions with Sophia and Greg. I think it's awesome that she threw him. And I'm actually liking Sophia, which is surprising, but I wasn't expecting to because I never like the Girl. (Cough cough, Akari, cough cough)but I like her personality.

Calling him a "Junior-martyr-in-training" was aweseome. And I like the line of "You are such a fucking moron sometimes" I thought that was neat.

Anyway, I decided I want to know more about the Nephilim-born, and that you should have a Nephilim-born character. So. Go get working on that.

:P

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tastelikeapples November 14 2005, 01:36:15 UTC
What's Akari from? Hikaru no Go? That's the only Akari I can remember ... And yeah, she was annoying.

*Grins.* I wanted there to be parallels between Sophia and Altessa. I kinda thought I was beating it to death, though. *Worried.* Did I beat it to death?

Um. Okay. Male or female?

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phoenixeiros November 19 2005, 03:10:48 UTC
Yes, Akari was from Hikaru no Go. And I uh.. didn't pick up on any parallels between then, but then, I'm kinda dense like that.

Err. Male.

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aestusargenteus November 13 2005, 23:56:00 UTC
I like the Sophia and Greg interactions, I really do. I want more of them. And it cracks me up that you used a South Park quote.

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tastelikeapples November 14 2005, 01:37:02 UTC
Oh, there will be. Although I do feel compelled to point out that I haven't actually seen that episode of South Park. I'm really hoping the dubious title didn't mean the whole episode was just weird, because it's not a bad quote.

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