just a stupid

Aug 10, 2004 00:49

The rain falls outside my window,
The vent hums beneath my bed,
The trees whisper in the wind,
The phone rings again and again,
The song on the radio fills the room,
The dogs bark for freedom,
The thunder booms in the distance,
The lady's voice comes over the intercom,
The clock ticks as the minutes roll on,
And all I hear is you.

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Hey babytugs August 10 2004, 06:51:48 UTC
Why did you name that stupid? I thought it was pretty good. Where did you find that at or did it just come into your head. By the way you should add me to you friends on live journal so that you can see what I write. Well I thought that thing you wrote was good and that is just how it is going to be. Well hugs from sweetwater.

Love Ya
Bobbi

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Re: Hey tastyangelbaby August 10 2004, 17:36:26 UTC
I wrote that poem myself. What is your screen name for livejournal? I will add you as soon as I can. Thanks for saying you thought my poem was good.

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Re: Hey babytugs August 11 2004, 07:07:34 UTC
my screen name for live journal is babytugs. Well you write good poems. So don't ever say that it is stupid. Love you Bobbi

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i liked it callahan04 August 10 2004, 17:44:40 UTC
Hey baby i think that your poem is good. I love you and i really love to read and listen to your poems. I wish i could hear more.
love ya

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Re: i liked it tastyangelbaby August 10 2004, 17:50:21 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. I wrote it about you. I have a few others I wrote about you too. I will try to share more with you.

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Re: i liked it callahan04 August 10 2004, 18:01:12 UTC
i would really enjoy hearing them baby.

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roschlut August 10 2004, 23:17:35 UTC
Aww! I love it! *hugs*

Love you

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Hiya honey_suckle August 11 2004, 10:36:48 UTC
I love your poem it was great :-) you should write more of them.

Love Aunt Janet Hugzzzz

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Re: Hiya tastyangelbaby August 11 2004, 10:59:39 UTC
I have written more, I just hardly ever let people read them. I dont think they are very good so that is why I dont let people read them.

Love ya bunches

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Re: Hiya honey_suckle August 11 2004, 14:11:50 UTC
well maybe one day you will let me read them some

Love Aunt Janet

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