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tatertots370

The Old Days--Marissa Season Two One shot

Jun 12, 2005 14:33

Title: The Old Days
Rating: PG-13. Eating disorder and alcholism mentions, along with language and some other things.
Genre: Angst/General/Romance?
Summary: Marissa talks to Luke on the phone and misses the old days. One shot. Around the middle of season two. Marissa/Luke-ish, Marissa/Ryan-ish, slightly Marissa/Alex-ish. Very slightly.
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Comments 9

mel39 June 12 2005, 20:46:43 UTC

I liked this alot Tatertots, your internal monologues are always thought provoking. I feel sorry for Marissa here, wishing herself back to a simpler time. I can se why she would want to do that.

tatertots370 June 12 2005, 22:27:02 UTC

Thanks! Internal monologues? I never even realized that's like what all of my fic is. Thanks for the new phrase!

diva5256 June 13 2005, 12:57:31 UTC

This a really sweet little drabble, and I think it shows Marissa as real and sensitive, which seems rare in fic, and I think its really nice the show a more subdubbed side of her, thats grown enough to see what she regrets, and I think you're right, based on the end of The Proposal Marissa would keep in touch with Luke, even though she never says so in canon. Mind if I friend you ?

tatertots370 June 13 2005, 16:06:21 UTC

Yeah, I find it a little hard to believe that Seth was closer with Luke than Marissa. Thanks for the comment!

I just have to comment on your icon. I thought that moment was so unbearbly stupid, but I never realized that he looked so PRETTY in it!

tatertots370 June 16 2005, 16:24:52 UTC

Oh, and I'm friending you back.

mgsmurf June 15 2005, 11:26:25 UTC

Nice Marissa insight. Yeah, it's probably normal somewhere in the middle of growing up to not see who you're going to be, but so long for who you were. It made it feel very real.

I also liked the Luke/Marissa to this, that given their past she'd remember him as her current connection to that old life, especially when it's not like she doesn't have Summer another connection around too. I could just see these casual check-ups turning into renewed adult love come another 2-5 years if they happened to be in the same place again.

tatertots370 June 16 2005, 16:33:30 UTC

Well...That's very interesting...Mind if I make that last part into a follow-up? I'll credit you! =)

Thanks for the review.

mgsmurf June 17 2005, 11:17:46 UTC

Take, take. I need no new plot bunnies, so run with it and have fun. No credit necessary.

tatertots370 June 18 2005, 03:07:22 UTC

=) I will anyways!