This is Stupendous Poetryvedette_cielMarch 9 2010, 01:27:35 UTC
"I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most, love."
WOW. This is a beautiful, lyrical testament to the sounds of many voices that want to be heard with one common need: DIGNITY. At first, when you read it, you wonder if it is one person. Then the situations, in their perpendicular make it sure it cannot. But are they not just all so truly the same? If the world cannot have a place to feed these hungry souls, does it not say that we are alone in our conflicts, away from what will keep us able to fight, for all we deserve? I can't imagine being any of these but somehow even I am all of them, if I once let these be my bias, if I do not give before I receive. I think this is a huge statement to what love needs to be. Tatgoat, you make me want to hug the world, and give away all to make the world a better place.
I will keep this poem close to me so I know how to always be sure I have more I can do.
Re: This is Stupendous PoetrytatgoatMarch 9 2010, 01:33:04 UTC
That was not mine. I found it in fanfiction net in a page of some author that was asking that anyone should post it in ther journal so that they can pass the point acros I was moved and so I did it. did I posted it wrong?
No, but I did think it was yours. Yet, it could speak for you somehow and maybe that is why you put it here, too. I love it, how it speaks for diversity and tolerance, yes? A message so needed. :)
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WOW. This is a beautiful, lyrical testament to the sounds of many voices that want to be heard with one common need: DIGNITY. At first, when you read it, you wonder if it is one person. Then the situations, in their perpendicular make it sure it cannot. But are they not just all so truly the same? If the world cannot have a place to feed these hungry souls, does it not say that we are alone in our conflicts, away from what will keep us able to fight, for all we deserve? I can't imagine being any of these but somehow even I am all of them, if I once let these be my bias, if I do not give before I receive. I think this is a huge statement to what love needs to be. Tatgoat, you make me want to hug the world, and give away all to make the world a better place.
I will keep this poem close to me so I know how to always be sure I have more I can do.
**Big HUG**
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