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Eros - Third Chapter

Dec 11, 2007 00:22

Title: Eros
Author: Tatia85
Rating: NC-17 [and not always for sex!].
Notes: This story contains reference to harsh situations. For more disclaimers please see the introduction here: http://tatia85.livejournal.com/1158.html#cutid1 .
Note 2°: I am so very, very sorry that this chapter took so long. I always want to have the next chapter ready before ( Read more... )

tatia85, eros, au!au

Comments 11

trekfan December 11 2007, 02:08:26 UTC

I can't say I am a student of ancient Greece but will Ennis have a inspirer? (by the name if Ioan, Jack? :D)

I am sorry our puter was down. I hope RL lets you write more of this interesting story.

tatia85 December 11 2007, 10:05:34 UTC

My computer is evil. That is <.< now I have a new one with my old documents in... but it is evil anyway u.u

The Ispirer had to be a men older than the Hearer and a Spartiate =) It was a ritualistic kind of relationship. It had to start between the 12 and the 13 years of the Hearer and keeps going till his 16/18 years. Jack is not a Spartiate [or, is believed not to be =P] and is the same age of Ennis. More about how such a relationship woul be wieved in next chapters!^_^

Thank you for reading and commenting!^^

rt_in_town December 11 2007, 05:18:28 UTC

I knew Ennis would choose Jack! I have doubts about Minosses now, though he seemed a harmless figure in the previous chapter. His mind seems to be babbling endlessly about Ioan being some kind of "sacrifice" - never a good sign! I have a feeling Ioan's new Spartiate master is quickly going to become quite attached to him :), and he'd better not let anything happen to him.

tatia85 December 11 2007, 10:01:28 UTC

well, who wouldn't choose Jack? u.u

Minosse is remembering something =) There are forces at work in this story, and I know in some part it is not easy, but [hopefully] all my faithfull readers [yes, all 4 of them! u.u] will understand sonn ^_^

Thank for reading and commenting! =D

sweetje December 11 2007, 08:36:50 UTC

I have to admit that this is a bit of a complicated story for my simple brain to wrap itself around, but the more I read, the more I think I understand it.
So, please forgive me if I'm seemingly ignorant of parts of it. I'm still enjoying reading it, and of course the two characters that stick out for me most prominantly are Ennis and Jack.
I'm hoping to see them together soon. It shows great promise that they will be together.

I will definately keep reading this fascinating story, and thank you again for the glossary of terms you use at the end of each chapter. It helps me understand more about the culture. This is sort of a history lesson for me. : )
Debra

tatia85 December 11 2007, 09:59:22 UTC

Yeah, I know it is kinda of a "difficul" story, like an history novel is kinda difficul ^-^ Don't worry! If there is something of incomprehensible in the story, may you let me know?^^ I will re-write the part =)

Thank you for commenting! ^-^ Yes, they will be together in the next couple of chapters or so =P

samtyr December 11 2007, 15:13:33 UTC

This is a really great fic. I am fascinated by everything about it. I can hardly wait to read more chapters. Thank you so much for sharing this.

tatia85 December 11 2007, 17:03:37 UTC

Well, thank you!^^ I am always a bit afraid that it is "too historical to be comprehensible" XD But looks like it is not the truth after all^^

max3b1 December 31 2007, 07:37:03 UTC

I hope you have had a good holiday break and I'm looking forward to more chapter updates
regards max

tatia85 December 31 2007, 17:30:44 UTC

next chapter is ready! I have almost decided to post it before the end of chapter 5 [which is what I usually do] unluckily, I am having big RL issue [I am ending university =) and I plan to spend a lot of time abroad] and so I am quite busy =\
I am starting another project of BBM fanfiction, quite a big thing, so I am busy for that too^^
thank for your comment!^^