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[tatia85]

Title: Eros
Author: Tatia85
Rating: NC-17 [and not always for sex!]. 
Notes: This story contains reference to harsh situations. For more disclaimers please see the introduction here:  http://tatia85.livejournal.com/1158.html#cutid1 . 
Note 2°: Another chapter long delayed *sighs* I know all my five readers [thank you, really!^__^] were waiting, but I

Comments

[lucerodelalba]

Hey! Just wanted to say that you certainly have far more than just five readers! I'm one of them, just never commented before. And your story is interesting and complicated, just like a good story should be. And your creativity...wow! It takes something to put Jack and Ennis in the middle of the Persian War...
Johanna

[tatia85]

Oh thank you!^_^ I will be sincere, this story comes from a dream I had... a very nice dreams indeed =P And from a book, "The Talos' Shield" or something like that [I know only the Italian title =) )

[bbmjack324]

Excellent. I'm so enjoying this..

I don’t understand; master Ennis… why should I go over the mountain? I am not trained…-
Ennis looks at the young hilot who is bitching near the tent.
Brown eyebrows frowns.
Does this guy ever stop talking?...

He looks at the other young man, still talking, voice like music.

[tatia85]

Thank you!^_^ I do believe that the first tought of Ennis about Jack was something like "Does he EVER stop talking?!" =P

[rt_in_town]

Oh Tatia, you've woven such a charming tale. The boys on the mountain start out adorable, Ioan having never been on a horse, panicking and grabbing onto the horse's mane, Ennis reaching over to steady him.... too cute! Then there are all the canon references, from Jack's complaining to the broken pipe to the trips up the mountain, as well as the sobering reminder that they aren't in an innocent mountain paradise, but at war, when Ennis comes back from the "bear attack" and Ioan tends to his wounds. I love the description of Ioan being "like a gentle faun", so playful and innocent. I am worried about the spot of Ioan's blood being a bit of foreshadowing though, and I'm also worried about Ennis sending his hilot up the mountain alone with a short sword he doesn't know how to use. Let's hope they change jobs soon, like in the story! I look forward to more.
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[tatia85]

Don't worry... nothing is going to happen... now =P
eheheheh

Ennis is wounded, worse than in the movie =) but he will live... and will have a nice night =P
Thank you! Really! ^_^

[anonymous]

sorry i can log in 'cause i am using a proxy to view this page.

All i want to say is that i think your writing style is special and anyway,i love it.So please do keep on writing.

Do you mind my asking a question? Are you a Greek? I think Greece is so fantastic country.BTW,i am from China.

Once again,thanks for your job.
Lifa

[anonymous]

Sorry, i make a mistake.

What i want to say is: I can't log in because i am using a proxy.

--Lifa

[tatia85]

Oh I am keeping writing! =P I am waiting to heard aboyt my wise&wonderful beta, I have sent to her the start of chapter five... I am not sure at all! XD

I am Italian, but I kinda like people thinking me Greece =P It means that the story "feels" real I guess ^_^
I have study a lot of ancient Greek, both lenguage and culture^^

China! What a fantastic country! Where in China? I have studied some of that culture too..

[anonymous]

Wow,Italian!To tell you the truth,I love Italy,too.Because I kind of love football and Inzaghi(if you know who he is.)

I am in the southern of China.A city called GuangZhou.(if you know that.)

I once studyed about ancient Rome,too.And anyway,I do love cultural exchange.

----lifa

[torry28]

I love this story because it is so well written and I love history of any kind and your detailed explanation of the particular time is very informative and exciting. I appreciate your very hard work to make the story more realistic in that ancient time.I do hope nothing devastating happens to our favorite characters.
Thank you and sorry for a late comment.
Torry