Random Moment of a Possible Life -Spank

[tatia85]

Title: Spank (217 words)
Rating: PG  
Disclaimers: any character you recognize belongs to Annie Proulx. OC are mine. No money made. 
Summary: So here it is... it is quite of a "weird" fanfiction, at least for me, 'cause it is no story at all! This one is the first of some drabbles I have (and will) written, they are Canon!Au, but I know nothing else

Comments

[tmn1966]

No one could blame Ennis for being unable to resist giving Jack a spanking when faced with that view.

Very nice! I like seeing a playful Ennis.

Teri

[tatia85]

I like to see it too! I do believe that Ennis, after a few months with Jack, would become more playnful, giving him changes to =P

Beside... temptation is temptation <.< that was too much for him =D

Thanks!

[el_wing]

The title that keeps on giving...

I love the playful tone of this with Ennis being all coy. Very in character with him, in my mind, too.

Plus there's spanking. I love that!

[tatia85]

You... you are that el_wing? The el_wing of Love Is Blind?
...
*faints*
*recovers*
Ouch... fainting day today! But an happy one at least =D

I haven't understood what you meant in the first line [never told to be good with english <.<] but yes, playnful!ennis is for sure a welcome sight =D

Me too... me tooo XD who don't love spaking? u.u

[el_wing]

That's me, Love is Blind el_wing, alright!

The first line "the title that keeps giving" explanation. Your title is "spanking" and I think you should have Ennis "keep giving" the spanking.
again, and again and again :)

I also like the other story your posting too and have been following it although I'm a bit remiss in commenting, I'd like to say I'm really enjoying it.

[torry28]

I liked it very much, a playful Ennis and a speechless Jack?
it warms the heart. Thank you.
Torry

[tatia85]

when you are too angered you become spechless *laughing* don't know if this ever happens to you... when you can't find something even after you have searched all the fu***g home =P

Yup. They kinda reverse roles =P

thank you for always commenting^^

[mariska_to]

That was so vivid and funny! Thank you. :)
I hope you keep writing.

[tatia85]

oh I am writing. The next one of this little serie will be titled probably "bendings". =P Plus, I am writing Eros and another project, a mammoth thing name "Trough Your Eyes" =)

Thank you!^_^

[samtyr]

LOL! Oh, this was very funny! :) I don't blame Ennis -- that butt of Jack's was just *made* to be spanked -- of course, the same is true for Ennis' butt... ;) Thank you so much for sharing this.

[tatia85]

well... who know, Jack may take revenge sooner or later... =P

Thank you!^_^