Eros - Fifth Chapter

Jan 30, 2008 12:04


Title: Eros
Author: Tatia85
Rating: NC-17 [and not always for sex!]. 
Notes: This story contains reference to harsh situations. For more disclaimers please see the introduction here:  http://tatia85.livejournal.com/1158.html#cutid1 . 
Disclaimers: any character you recognize belongs to Annie Proulx. OC are mine. Well, some characters are historical. No ( Read more... )

eros, au!au

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el_wing January 30 2008, 14:03:26 UTC
Thanks so much for this. I love the parallel between this and the first night in the tent. Very well done. I especially like the break-away with the owl and how you do the same later in the chapter with nature, Spring and Night and Dawn, all personified. Beautiful

Thanks.

el

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tatia85 February 17 2008, 19:13:13 UTC
And, one month later, come the answer <.< sigh. Sorry, I am awful late but I have been awful busy!

Thank you for you comment^^

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freakylemurcat January 30 2008, 18:50:41 UTC
Yay! You have posted!

*snuggles the fic* I really do adore this chapter, I really, really do. It's just so darn good!

Huggles!

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sweetje January 30 2008, 23:13:29 UTC
This chapter was well written. I really enjoyed reading this story, even though I was a bit lost for a little bit. I like your unique style. I hope you write more.
Debra

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tatia85 February 17 2008, 19:14:59 UTC
Eh I know^^ difficult story. Sorry, I know I am late, but I have been very busy! Thank you^^ I am writing more =P

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samtyr January 31 2008, 01:48:07 UTC
You have done a wonderful job evoking time and place, and your Jack and Ennis are very solid characters as well. I am enjoying this fic very much and I am always looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing this.

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tatia85 February 17 2008, 19:18:02 UTC
Thank you too! I am writing, but RL is a regular bitch =\ Too much work for my university (I am ending). Sorry I am late even to reply >.<
Soon more anyway!

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adahleah January 31 2008, 03:43:27 UTC
this was a great chapter and well written.

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tatia85 February 17 2008, 19:20:02 UTC
thank you!^^

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