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Feb 29, 2008 20:46

CIRCUS, THIRD CHAPTER

Rating: ***... maybe **** sex in public place, "extreme" bending, exhibition, anal, "oral", slightly domination.
Note: Un-betaed yet. I will change it in the beta version as soon as possible, but I don't want to stress my poor, darling beta too much! Hopes you understand this.

DEDICATION: to myeyesaintblue with her WONDERFUL ( Read more... )

circus, lovefest, au!au

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tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:21:57 UTC
yeah... pretty hot isn't it? *_* quite proud of that scene, if I can say it myself!

Thank you for your comment!^_^

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samtyr March 2 2008, 16:34:00 UTC
Wow, this was very hot. I loved your description of how flexible Jack is, and how unexpectedly dominant Ennis is. I only hope that Aguirre doesn't find out too soon and cause trouble for them. I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing this.

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tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:24:59 UTC
ehehehe I have already answered about Aguirre I fear XD And I have a thing for dominant!Ennis. Thought Dominant!Jack is nice too... but Ennis is more that kind of man I think!

Thank you for always commenting. I really appreciate it^^

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jacks_key March 2 2008, 17:13:43 UTC
There's not a man alive who doesn't wish he could suck his own cock! LOL

Very hot. I really enjoy reading about these two. :)

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tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:25:55 UTC
ahahah I agree! The idea came after I saw some *really* hot stuff in y-gallery (do you know it?) about flexbility... ehehehe

thank you!^_^

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OMG brokeback1963 March 2 2008, 19:26:02 UTC
OMG that's fucking hot!! Jesus!!! You got me all dizzy!! What a scene!! Jack sucking himself. DED!!! The sex was sooooooooo hot, but I adore the sweetness and the love I can see here.

Beautifully written, Ennis inner thoughts are wonderful. I love these boys. So precious story. Thank you so much for this.

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Re: OMG tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:26:56 UTC
glad to have made you all dizzy! XD it is kinda the basic idea of the writing XD
Yup, they are in love after all... eheheh

thank you!^__^ I do like your comment!

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¿Qué has desayunado hoy? carmenmariabs March 3 2008, 14:56:14 UTC
Spain, 16h
Una promesa es una promesa, que menos que un espectaculo privado de contorsionismo solo para Ennis,... solo para tus ojos, solo para tu boca, solo para tí.
Se nota que estan en buena forma, sobre todo Jack, no sé quien de los dos ha disfrutado más, si, tal vez si lo sé, ...a lo mejor yo.
Gracias, a por el próximo.
Carmen
P.D.: A ver donde lo escribes, donde sea pero que resulte como éstos.

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Re: ¿Qué has desayunado hoy? tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:27:46 UTC
Well, he is a contortionist. He needs to be able to do such things!^__^
Thank you for your comments! Yeah, I agree... a promise is a promise! ^__^

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