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tatia85

Lovefest, 4° Chapter

Mar 04, 2008 23:35

Circus, 4° Chapter.
Summary: More fun under the big top.
Warnings: ** 1/2. Blinfold, very slight domination, bottom!Ennis, sex in public place, self-play.

Note: last entry! And so this is my official first-ever completed BBM fanfiction. Quite proud of myself, here. Let me know if you enjoyed the ride!

Note 2: This is NOT my last entry at the Lovefest! ( Read more... )

circus, bbm, lovefest, au!au

Comments 14

CIRCUS Chapter 4 bmshirts March 5 2008, 00:13:36 UTC

Very nice end to this story. Jack and Ennis together is always a good thing! Too bad that Aguirre couldn't be prosecuted for threatening to harm Jack. And someone shoulg punish Luc as well! Thanks. Carole

Re: CIRCUS Chapter 4 tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:14:21 UTC

Well, Luc was a kid, and unsure about what to do :) And who cares about Aguirre? The boys are happy!

Thank you for being always here in this, albeit short, ride!^__^

cazzyj6740 March 5 2008, 04:22:35 UTC

oh my dear, what a fabulous story you have created! Such a great imagination, and a wicked one as well *grin*
I enjoyed this SO much, even if they weren't my cowboys! LOL I am just starting to get caught up now, so I apologize for not commenting sooner!

HUGS

tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:16:42 UTC

Well, thank you!^_^ Wicked? Who? Me? *all angelic-like* lol!

I am writing only a story in which they are cowboys: Trough Your Eyes... in Eros they are in Ancient Greek, and in the short story I am going to write for the next lovefest entries they will be... well :P you will see! XD

Don't worry about the comments! I am so very glad you are rewieving now^_^

sweetje March 5 2008, 09:15:27 UTC

I absolutely love the sweet ending to this wonderful story. I was worried there for a bit that it wouldn't be a happy ending for our boys, but I'm very happy that it turned out the way it did.
Aguirre deserved everything Jack did to him, yes he did.
Thank you for sharing this story. I hope to see more stories from you in the future. : )
Debra

tatia85 March 5 2008, 13:18:00 UTC

Well, I wanted to add just a little bit of angst! =P
And I agree about Aguirre. He did deserved it u.u

Thank you for your always kind comments!^_^

jacks_key March 5 2008, 14:06:31 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this story. I'm glad they ended up together. Great job on this! :)

ramona4jake March 5 2008, 14:28:24 UTC

Beautiful, beautiful story !! You outdone yourself, it is awesome !! I was afraid, till the very end, that Ennis will leave and Jack will have to leave without him for the rest of his life, for ever regretting that he didn't see all those signs ! Imagine that life !!... But now I'm so glad it turned out to be exactly the opposite - yes !
Thank you so much !