Comments | tattooedloyalty: Magazine 2; Round 2

tattooedloyalty

Magazine 2; Round 2

Jun 27, 2009 02:35

I have taken it upon myself to accept your challenge, BRaWLDOS:
( Challenge Fulfilled. )

Comments 69

LOL FUCK upyourscolonel June 27 2009, 07:05:15 UTC

Ryo's not even like a word.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:06:08 UTC

Names don't have to be words.

upyourscolonel June 27 2009, 07:07:10 UTC

Colonel Ryo is a ho.

It's so true to life, too. Although, I bet even as a woman, Colonel would be a womanizer

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:09:19 UTC

That's not how the story went. When you write one, you can make it so.

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youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:15:43 UTC

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:16:43 UTC

You don't appreciate my work, sir?

youresoshort June 27 2009, 07:18:57 UTC

I think your ending needs to be improved, Lieutenant.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:20:00 UTC

My ending enforces discipline for an unsavory action.

Thread 15

feistyflowright June 27 2009, 07:21:31 UTC

...With a story like that...I must admit that the moral seems like quite a powerful message.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:23:31 UTC

It's how many fairy tales from my childhood ended. A serious conclusion to make clear a serious point.

feistyflowright June 27 2009, 07:24:56 UTC

Haha~ How very...efficient.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 07:26:02 UTC

It did work quite well.

Thread 15

cagemyhappiness June 27 2009, 08:28:10 UTC

What a lovely story.

tattooedloyalty June 27 2009, 14:51:00 UTC

Why thank you, I appreciate the compliment.

cagemyhappiness June 28 2009, 01:03:59 UTC

Do you write ones like that often?

tattooedloyalty June 28 2009, 01:04:50 UTC

I do not usually write at all, really.

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leavecloakalone June 28 2009, 01:47:27 UTC

Oh... oh my.

tattooedloyalty June 28 2009, 01:52:31 UTC

Hmm?

leavecloakalone June 28 2009, 01:58:19 UTC

Ah... that was very well done, Riza.

tattooedloyalty June 28 2009, 01:59:56 UTC

Thank you, Faize.

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