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[tattycoram]

Title: ShinRa “unofficial” work do.
Rating: R I guess
Warnings: Bit silly :) Unbetaed because no one loves me *wail* ;)
Summary: What would happen if Sephiroth went into a strip bar?
Pairings: Angeal, Sephiroth, Cloud and Zack …..Angeal / Rufus

**Spellings - I’m English so "pants" here means underpants as opposed to trousers!!

Comments

[white_jenna]

:D That made me very happy. *squishes* That prompt really just grabbed a hold of me for some reason. Thanks for letting me pimp it out. :) I've got someone on the f-list to send it to, and looks like I just missed springkink, but there's always next time.
BTW, I'm always up for beta-ing. Main thing I saw: I that took the noise of his blood outside of himself and let it’s need be heard. Wrong its.
Could use a sprinkling of commas throughout, but other than that, I think it's very good. And love the courting dance/claiming ritual line.

[tattycoram]

Tee hee. I have this image of Sephiroth's flawless work record and then in the middle somewhere it says "April 5th - complaints filed with relation to assault, battery, indecent public exposure, visiting an illegal establishment, being drunk and disorderly in a public place, disturbance of the peace, extensive damage to hotel property and fraternising with the lower ranks. April 6th - Did not get out of bed for training."

I'm a beta-ing virgin *blush and giggle* but as long as you're gentle and don't tell my mother I'd love to, thank you :p

Fixed the comma :) I've seen something I don't like as well, bah but I need to eat some more heart attack inducing food before I change it. Every meal today has been biscuits and cheese :o

[white_jenna]

Whereas it just blends in with the rest of the chaos that is Zack's record. :D

It spreads....

[white_jenna]

http://misumisu84.livejournal.com/30111.html#cutid1

[mako_pretty]

THE. BEST. THING. EVER! You totally rock for this! *beams idiotically*