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barb1808 January 7 2013, 12:42:43 UTC
I just read your story and you had me smiling in every chapter. Thanks for that! :)

I love the tropes you used and how you kinda dissected them.

Well done!

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taverl January 8 2013, 05:51:11 UTC
And thank YOU for your lovely feedback!

Smiles are *exactly* what I was going for, so it's great to hear you enjoyed it. :)

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sickbay23 January 7 2013, 17:04:30 UTC
Wonderful and funny, i too had to laugh at every chapter, great work :)

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taverl January 8 2013, 05:51:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - and took the time to comment. :)

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treksnoopy January 8 2013, 04:36:28 UTC
Bravo! This is adorable!

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taverl January 8 2013, 05:53:12 UTC
Thank you so much for all your lovely feedback! It's a relief to know I'm not the only one who finds some of these fanon tropes amusing.

But then, where would we be without them, right? :)

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savoytruffle January 9 2013, 04:17:55 UTC
This was really fun. I love the way you linked the parts together as people moved around the mess hall.

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taverl January 10 2013, 05:35:00 UTC
I was hoping the "hand-off" from one character to the next worked.

Thanks very much for the feedback! :D

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mijan March 24 2013, 07:50:37 UTC
The whole fic is just delightful. I love how you tackled all those standard cliches and turned them on their heads. So much fun! Thank you for writing it and sharing with us!

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