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tawabids

The Pervvy Bathroom Challenge!

May 02, 2006 01:33

I've been a lurker for a while now at the delicious journel of laurel-tx. Finally I've answered the her latest fic challenge ( Read more... )

Comments 13

laurel_tx May 2 2006, 02:38:38 UTC

OMG, I bet Harry is EVEN MORE traumatized for life at seeing a vision of his dead mother telling him to stop being gay when he was making out with Ron! ACK!

I like how you wrote Lily & Petunia's parents here. As accepting they were of Lily's magical abilities, Petunia must have gotten her uptightness from somewhere. I bet her parents weren't the most diverse people.

"James was the one being compromised by Sirius."

I think I love you, just for that line. WHY haven't you written anything for me before...? *chains you to a computer*

Homophobic!Lily! That's something I don't see much, what a neat twist. I suppose seeing a vision of your baby son as a naked teenager fooling around with ANYBODY would be a nightmare, but to see him with another boy would be very shocking, indeed, especially in 1980.

Great job, I love it! : ) I'm about to post the pimping thread. Lemme know which name you want on the "win at life" icon, ok?

tawabids May 2 2006, 04:12:28 UTC

*blushes as maroon as Ron* shucks, I've never been chained to a computer by someone else before. Usually I have to do it myself. Pity this isn't a kinky sort of chaining, just another nose-to-the-grindstone sort of chaining...

I love your fic challenges, they're always splendiferously squeeable. This one just slapped me in the face and cried "Write me!" I'll certainly be hanging out for the next one.

That was my favourite line as well! And mmmm, homo!nervous Lily is my favourite character today - I am resolutely against writing Perfect!Lily. Ever. She is everywhere in HPFandom. Somebody give her a pimple or something!

Hmm, "Tawa Bids" or "Sophia" on my Winner's Cup? Sophia will do, then people who know me personally won't get confused.

Thanks for all the comments! And for the pimpage! And for all the times your journal has made me laugh!

laurel_tx May 18 2006, 20:44:18 UTC

Guess what?

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y129/laurellily/mistaken%20identity/sophia.png

tawabids May 19 2006, 12:20:34 UTC

YESSSHHH!!

*cheers drunkenly*

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nattybear May 2 2006, 06:41:53 UTC

WAH this is so good! And wierd! Wow. I don't read much with Lily unless for some reason Harry's seeing his dead parents in a story, but I've never seen her homophobic before or lacking understanding at all! Hah. That bit with her parents explains a lot, too.

Aww, poor Harry. Seeing his dead mom telling him to stop making out with Ron? Poor baby.

And dude. You officially rock for making this slightly Sirius/James, too. His face was unreadable. Mmm.

Loved it! *memories*

tawabids May 2 2006, 07:19:07 UTC

Thanks so much! Haha, you know what unreadable Sirius was thinking? "Geez, it was just a bit of cockfighting...no need to get riled up..."

hogwartshoney May 2 2006, 11:38:49 UTC

Came across from laurel-tx's pimpage. Great story! Messed with my head, but I will agree that 'James was the one being compromised by Sirius' is a stroke of literary genius! *would have paid GALLEONS to see that* Also, liked the Harry/Ron scene. If only!!!

tawabids May 3 2006, 04:11:24 UTC

Thanks! I'm a sucker for Harry/Ron. If it's not canon, it's still the next best thing.

carnilia May 2 2006, 19:08:17 UTC

That was a very neat idea!

tawabids May 3 2006, 04:12:02 UTC

Thank you!

potter_lover456 May 4 2006, 04:02:37 UTC

I likey! It was so cool, special since you killed perfect!Lily. If I ever write her, she's a bitch that is going to stand James up. Atleast for the first date.

I just love your story all around, even though I dont read H/R. UI hope you do more for the challenge.

tawabids May 4 2006, 04:38:00 UTC

Glad to hear it! I get bored by James/Lily stories very easily because there is so little variability in characterisation. Thanks for commenting, love!