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Home Invasion 1/9

Oct 30, 2012 00:26

Title: Home Invasion (1/9)
Author: tay_21
Fandom: Primeval
Pairings: Connor/Abby
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Angst, violence, romance... eventually
Warning/Advertisements: violence
Word Count: 16,256 (total)
Disclaimer: Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note: Initially written for deinonychus_1's birthday, ( Read more... )

author: tay_21, romance, dark, angst, primeval, birthday, connor/abby, hurt/comfort, violence

Comments 20

flaccidduck October 30 2012, 06:40:56 UTC

Great start. Full of tension and intrigue

tay_21 October 31 2012, 00:21:26 UTC

Thanks. Part two will be up late tonight or early tomorrow. :-)

tay_21 November 1 2012, 03:37:47 UTC

Hey, I had to edit this chapter to get Part 2 to fit correctly. You may want to give the ending a reread as it's different now than when you read it.

freddiejoey October 30 2012, 10:11:05 UTC

This is off to a flying start!!

tay_21 November 1 2012, 03:39:15 UTC

Thank you. Chapter 2 is now up. I'm about to cross post to the comms. ALSO, you may want to give the ending of this chapter a reread as I changed it because of posting length for chapter 2. THese first 2 chapters will be the longest in the story.

aunteeneenah October 30 2012, 13:07:24 UTC

You do intend to post daily....right? or possibly hourly? This is agonizingly good. My poor darlings. Smart of Abby to open up an anomaly but since I see 7 chapters, I don't think help is gonna get there very quickly. More please, quickly. I'm old and can't take this much stress...*g*

aunteeneenah October 30 2012, 13:08:32 UTC

Okay, 6 chapters. *g*

tay_21 November 1 2012, 03:42:31 UTC

I intend to post as often as I can. I have a new adopted son now and since he's a premie infant, he keeps me on my toes. That's where I've been the last several weeks. LOL! Sorry for disappearing on y'all.

Also, it IS 7 chapters. A N D you will want to give the ending of this first chapter a reread as I had to change it so that I could fit all of the info in chapter 1 and 2 into the post length requirements. *kicks LJ*

Thanks so much for your comments.

aunteeneenah November 1 2012, 12:46:15 UTC

Completely and totally understand. Babies are a full-time job and a preemie is even more so. *g* *sends hugs to the new mommie*

gilove2dance October 30 2012, 19:11:02 UTC

NOOOO!!!! I CAN'T TAKE ALL THIS TENSION!! Poor Connor and Abby and the kids, and Connor with his expressive eyes that I could picture perfectly I CAN'T....please update soon so I know that everything will alright!!!

tay_21 November 1 2012, 03:44:48 UTC

Hahaha! Sorry? LOL! I'm evil. You love it. :-P

Part 2 is up, as soon as I respond to all my comments, I'll cross post to the comms.

You will need to give the end of this chapter a reread because I had to change it to get chapter 2 to fit into the LJ posting length. *kicks LJ*

Thanks so much for your enthusiastic comment. :-)

judithjohn October 31 2012, 00:49:42 UTC

I'm hooked well and truly!

tay_21 November 1 2012, 03:53:55 UTC

Awww, thanks. Chapter 2 is up and I am about to cross post.

Sorry for the inconvenience of this, but in order to get chapter 2 to fit into LJ's silly posting length requirements, I had to redo the ending of this chapter. So, that means that you will want to reread the ending of this chapter before you move on to chapter 2. It's not much, but it's enough.

Thanks so much for the comment.