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tay_21

Home Invasion 4/9

Nov 09, 2012 23:05

Title: Home Invasion (4/9)
Author: tay_21
Fandom: Primeval
Pairings: Connor/Abby
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Angst, violence, romance... eventually
Warning/Advertisements: violence
Word Count: 16,256 (total)
Disclaimer: Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note: Initially written for deinonychus_1's ( Read more... )

author: tay_21, romance, angst, primeval, birthday, connor/abby, hurt/comfort, violence

Comments 17

freddiejoey November 10 2012, 05:42:38 UTC

beautiful angst as always.

tay_21 November 12 2012, 19:26:02 UTC

Thank you so much.

sandyleepotts November 10 2012, 06:18:29 UTC

Poor Abby, looking after her broken little family.

I trust you to put them back together, and know that no matter what happens wether in life or death the Temple Family will always have each other.

tay_21 November 12 2012, 19:35:26 UTC

Abby was a great character to write in this story. I really liked using her perspective.

I'm not saying how this ends. ;-) You'll just have to wait and see. :-P The little Temple family IS very close nit though. They are all affected by what happens to the others. *huggles them*

sandyleepotts November 12 2012, 22:34:58 UTC

Ok...

Now you have me worried!

tay_21 November 13 2012, 17:48:07 UTC

Have a little faith and keep reading. :-)

Thread 5

judithjohn November 10 2012, 06:42:54 UTC

Very gripping. You're doing a great job with this fic.

tay_21 November 12 2012, 19:36:32 UTC

Thank you. It was a long time coming, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.

gilove2dance November 10 2012, 17:59:00 UTC

Ugh my heart is breaking for Abby! I loved the whole insight into Becker with his relationship with Sarah holding him back from starting a new one with Jess...Seriously love that. And poor Connor :(

tay_21 November 12 2012, 19:39:48 UTC

I was quite rough with the Temple's in this one. Sorry about that. LOL!

I don't normally write Becker, at least not that deeply, but it was fun invading his head a little for this one. I love the idea of Becker/Jess. They seem like a good match for each other.

aunteeneenah November 10 2012, 19:33:27 UTC

You've really taken this in an interesting direction by bringing in Becker's inner pain. The fact that his feelings for Sarah are holding him back is very insightful. Poor Abby, she can't lose her Connor and the kids can't lose their dad so I'm looking for a happy ending...after much angst. Well done.