Home Invasion 5/9

[tay_21]

Title: Home Invasion (5/9)
Author: tay_21 
Fandom: Primeval
Pairings: Connor/Abby
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Angst, violence, romance... eventually 
Warning/Advertisements: violence  
Word Count: 16,256 (total)
Disclaimer: Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Note: Initially written for deinonychus_1's birthday,

Comments

[freddiejoey]

Another great chapter!

[sandyleepotts]

Poor Connor,
(Two of my favourite words!)

He's still in a medically induced coma, and now has a swelling on the brain!

Now this swelling can do one of two things,
1). Make him into more of a child than he was in series one.

Or...

2). Give him special powers that make him invincible!

Personally I prefer option 2!

Poor Abby, having to see her broken family like this.

Uncle Becker is just the best! His storytelling! Making the Pristichamps into a dragon! Cool!

Love 'King Lester'. He really is the best.

Well done for another emotion filled chapter.

[aunteeneenah]

Gotta tell ya, I check every day (several times a day) looking for the next chapter in your series and I find it at 4:30 in the morning cuz my dog needs out! lol Well done, m'Dear. Lester and Becker are the best and I like that you've brought in that the kids are gonna pick up on things. They aren't as clueless as grownups like to imagine. Sarah and Nick know something is amiss and are gonna make sure they get answers. This is good stuff.

[natchris]

Well done on this chapter and the plot in general. It's a fantastic read.

[moura1371]

So incredibly good. I live for the next part. Gotta know, it's like a train wreck, I can't stop. Does that make me twisted? oh well It's wonderful. Love it.