Proposition, Dark Blue, R, Dean/Jaimie/(Carter)

[taylor_serenil]

Title: Proposition
Author: taylor_serenil 
Rating: R
Length: ~8K
Relationship: Established Dean/Jaimie, hints of future Dean/Jaimie/Carter
Summary: Carter doesn't know everything.
Disclaimer: Not mine. All for fun, not for money.

Notes: As the title suggests, this is the bit in Trinity-verse where Dean and Jaimie make their move on Carter. Rating is for themes

Comments

[whogeek]

Mmmm. Very nice! I especially like the last line. It just pulls the whole thing together so well. **pokes** I still want to see more of the chameleon!Verse stuff! **pleading puppy-dog eyes** I like chameleon!Dean. I want the next bit that you keep talking about.

[taylor_serenil]

Chameleon!Dean is being shy and hiding. Although he did flit through my brain while driving several days back, so you may get that "Dean meets Nicole" bit eventually. Because yeah, I want to write it, too, but the words beyond the bare-bones aren't coming to me.

On this one--I'm glad you enjoyed it. And given that I tend to have trouble with endings (ask dime how many times she's had to spoon-feed me one :)), I'm really glad you liked the last line.

Hopefully there should be more Trinity-verse soon (and hopefully that qualifies as a decent consolation prize for chameleon!Dean being back-burnered). I've got two that just need some porn work (one's too stripped-down, one's too similar to something else in this verse) and one that's about half-written.

[whogeek]

**wallops Chameleon!Dean in the head with a snowball for hiding** There's no reason for Chameleon!Dean to hide. He's, quite frankly, adorable as all get out, and should not hide.

Trinity-verse is a pretty good consolation prize. Especially with a sub-tendencies!Dean thrown in for good measure. Makes it quite enjoyable. XD

[taylor_serenil]

Chameleon!Dean says ouch to the snowball. Seriously, it's in the queue and hopefully will start growing words soon. And I know it's frustrating waiting on somebody to update--I've had the sensation on the other end, and it's one of the reasons I was a little hesistant to post chameleon-verse initially.

Even canon Dean comes across kind of sub at times, so I just pushed that a little farther for Trinity-verse. For Carter's second birthday after they all hook up, he's probably even going to be collared.(They're taking Carter to a BDSM club so they can be open about the kink factor and the threesome thing for once.) If you want to see the beginning of that, drop me an e-mail (no sex yet, just Dean thinking a little).

[dime_for_12]

It's so great to see it up, and I think it's a wonderful 'verse!

great job! :D

[taylor_serenil]

*purrs like my housemate's cat at "wonderful 'verse" and "great job"*

I just want to get Scheme and Acceptance done now (Margaritaville would be nice too).

And I really want to get that "Dean meets Nicole" scene for chameleon-verse done, because I've been promising that for months now.

[rorylie]

Just reading this again because I love it so. I think I've mentioned all the little parts that get me already, the stretching and skin and her sitting in his lap and the cuddling. I love how forward they are, both in action and they way they basically lay it all out. I love them promising to work on him while he's thinking about it.

And that's the perfect place to end it.

[taylor_serenil]

I'm happy to know you love this enough to reread it.

Yeah, they're being about as blunt as they can be here. I can't see them really going with the subtle approach--mostly because I think Carter would at least try to ignore subtlety, and also because I think it's more IC for them to be forward.

And (given my ending issues) I'm glad you thought that was the perfect stopping point.