Comments | taylor_serenil: Acceptance, Dark Blue, Dean/Jaimie/Carter, NC-17

taylor_serenil

Acceptance, Dark Blue, Dean/Jaimie/Carter, NC-17

Apr 04, 2010 03:38

Title: Acceptance
Author: taylor_serenil
Relationship: Dean/Carter/Jaimie
Length: ~11K
Disclaimer: Not mine. All for fun, not for money.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Carter says yes.
Warnings/notes: Trinity-verse. First-time Dean/Carter/Jaimie, established Dean/Jaimie. Explicit het, explicit slash. Pegging. Rimming. D/s. As always, many thanks for dime_for_12's beta services--they ( Read more... )

trinity-verse, dean bendis/carter shaw/jaimie allen, het, slash, dark blue, fic, explicit

Comments 4

rorylie April 4 2010, 11:52:12 UTC

Okay, first, that last line is perfection.

I love the whole thing, and it's super hot. You know I'm a big fan of Dean and Jaimie being the king and queen of being prepared when it comes to sex, and I love that they brought snacks. I like them kind of taking turns and each having their little pockets of intimacy within the bigger thing. Love Dean just stripping down, and for some reason I really love the line about tasting blood when Jaimie comes. Oh, and the part about feeling the twinges from her fucking him when he's fucking Carter.

taylor_serenil April 5 2010, 05:18:17 UTC

For once I actually came up with my own last line, so thank you.

Yeah, I knew from earlier versions you got a kick out of them being ultra-prepared sex-wise. The snacks--well, it is Carter's house, and who knows if there's any actual food beyond fruit cups there? Good sex makes you hungry, so I thought "hey, if they're already bringing supplies, they ought to bring some food/drinks for afterwards, too".

The kind of taking turns stuff--when I'm writing threesomes, I tend to write the sex like that, where nobody's really doing serious sexual multitasking (okay, except for Dean in Indulgence). I figure if it's good, concentrating on multiple things at once isn't going to work that well. The little pockets of intimacy is something of an outgrowth of that. It's one of the reasons I had Jaimie be the one to prep Carter (well, that and the fact that I thought it was kinkier than having Dean do it).

Dean just stripping down--well, this is the verse where he's sub enough to get a kick out of being naked while Jaimie and Carter still have ( ... )

whogeek April 5 2010, 02:35:46 UTC

That... Turned me on. And the snacks was so much ftw. And Dean not holding back on voicing his appreciation. So much hotness in just a short little bit. Holy Fuck.

taylor_serenil April 5 2010, 05:35:47 UTC

I'm very flattered that this turned your crank. I attempt to bring the hot when I write porn, so I'm always glad to know that I succeeded.

I'm amused that you and rorylie both got a kick out of them bringing snack food for afterward.

Dean letting Carter know what he's doing is working for him--well, I thought that was hot too.

And speaking of Dean, the chameleon version finally talked to me. Your Easter present of unbetaed and rather ridiculous Dean-meets-Nicole will be in the mail as soon as I get a chance to send it.