Comments | taylor_serenil: Snippets (various relationships, not worksafe, Dark Blue & Dark Blue/SPN crossover)

taylor_serenil

Snippets (various relationships, not worksafe, Dark Blue & Dark Blue/SPN crossover)

Jun 21, 2011 03:00

I haven't managed to write anything longer than a few paragraphs for a while, but I thought y'all might appreciate seeing what I have managed to write. Completely unbetaed, and quite rough as a result.

( My take on sex pollen, Dean/Carter/Jaimie/Alex/Ty (bare-bones porn is Dean/Ty, and this is not Expanded-verse). Implied het. )

dean bendis/dean winchester, slash, chameleon-verse, dark blue, dean bendis/carter shaw, supernatural, crossover, het, fic, dean/carter/jaimie/ty/alex, hard r

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dime_for_12 June 21 2011, 19:18:45 UTC

I absolutely love this line:

"No promises, so drive it like you stole it."

Also, you should really expand possessive!Dean. I want someone rip-roaring jealous over Carter (because, omg, I <3 CARTER).

It's so great to see you on LJ again, you don't even know!

taylor_serenil June 22 2011, 06:22:43 UTC

The drive it like you stole it line just sounded like something Dean would say to Ty under those circumstances. So I'm glad you loved it.

I promise if possessive!Dean gets any longer you will get first peek (well, along with rorylie). Because yes, Dean jealous over Carter would be hot. And Carter totally deserves to have someone jealous over him. Do you have a preference on who's making the green-eyed monster bite?

I don't especially want to have to acknowledge the canon Carter/Alex if I can avoid it. Personally if Dean's going to get jealous over someone, I kind of want Dante Rodriguez from Trinity to show up (pre-remarriage), because I think Dean might be more jealous of a guy than he would be a girl. Especially one with the kind of history that I set up for Carter and Dante--the whole partners-with-benefits thing. I need to get rorylie to send me the pic of Daniel Sunjata that we decided is what Dante looked like back when him and Carter were knocking boots (because the man is smoking in it ( ... )

rothesis June 22 2011, 04:12:05 UTC

I'm glad you posted this. Just a week ago, I hit your journal to reread some fic. It's good to know you are still interested in this fandom, even if the writing isn't cooperating.

taylor_serenil June 22 2011, 07:34:00 UTC

(Deleted and reposted for html fail).

I'm very flattered that you liked my fic enough to reread it recently (and that you're glad to see the snippet roundup).

I tend to alternate between periods of total nothingness and having a few different stories in assorted stages of progress. Unfortunately for everybody (me included), this seems to be one of the dead zones.

For your commenting, have some Masquerade-verse stuff. Snippet, and my (slightly edited) side of a chat transcript.

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Jaimie's got the kind of smile on her face that Ty's quickly learned to appreciate. He never thought he was that vanilla, but he's done a lot of things since he's been with Dean and Jaimie that he's never done before--enjoyed them, too. He wonders what she's got in mind this time ( ... )

rothesis June 22 2011, 16:49:04 UTC

Nice. Thanks for the snippet. I like your ideas. I agree Ty needs to be eased into bottoming.

taylor_serenil June 23 2011, 07:10:37 UTC

I'm glad you appreciated the snippet and further thoughts. In my head Ty in this verse as mentioned did some circle jerks back when and may have jacked a guy or two off. But he definitely hasn't ever bottomed pre-Dean (and very possibly has not even been fingered). So yeah, Jaimie and Dean are taking his intro to bottoming slowly (and I think at some point Dean may have spelled out that if he never wants to get fucked that's definitely not a dealbreaker to stay with them).

I also think that part of why he's interested in trying now is because the first time Dean bottomed for him he was anything but passive so Ty knows that getting fucked does not automatically mean submitting more than he's comfortable with. And I'm currently thinking that Ty's first time getting fucked is going to be him riding Dean, possibly including Dean being cuffed, because a) hot imagery and b) Dean's letting him have as much control of the situation as possible.

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whogeek July 23 2011, 12:13:27 UTC

**Tackles you** :DDD Awesome snippets. Seriously want that sex-pollen one. That promises to be amazingly porny. :D

Also, hi, late comment is late. Have been very busy with my summer job. Haven't seen you around for quite a while either.

taylor_serenil July 24 2011, 00:53:10 UTC

***Hugs back while being tackled***

I'm really glad you thought the snippets were awesome. Yeah, if the sex pollen one gets to real NC-17 levels as opposed to the bare-bones Dean/Ty in the snippet, amazingly porny is probably going to be a good description. I'm figuring everybody's pretty much going to be taking turns with Dean--got anything you'd particularly like to see? I obviously can't promise that the muses will treat your suggestions as tasty food, but I've had some success using prompts as jump-off points in the past.

I know what I want to write for the chameleon-verse one (Carter jacking off thinking about Dean), but I'm not getting pretty detailed pics at the moment.

I'm not sure the possessiveness one is actually going to get longer, although I'd love to make dime happy and have Dean all jealous over a guy. I just like the mental imagery of Carter and Dante (who looks like Daniel Sunjata in one of his good pics) making out with Dean watching ( ... )

taylor_serenil July 24 2011, 04:00:49 UTC

In lieu of fivesome sex pollen (at least for the moment), have some thoughts on Expanded-verse's Dean's birthday porn.

Dean's done up like a naughty schoolgirl for it because Jaimie said it'd be hot watching him get his birthday spankings dressed like that, so her and Alex put kissproof lipstick on him in a shade of red to coordinate with the red and green plaid skirt he's wearing and lined his eyes with liquid eyeliner. He's got the little tied-up white shirt on like old-school Britney, too.

The first act post-spanking is going to be Carter flipping his skirt up, shoving the thong he's wearing underneath it over, and fucking him. Haven't decided between hard and fast or slow and teasing. Possibly including Carter rimming him as foreplay, which is not really one of my bulletproof kinks, but the Carter in my head is all "if Dean was a girl I'd go down first, so why not?" (Apparently Carter here doesn't think there's much of a line between rimming and going down on a girl, despite the obvious differences. Go figure ( ... )