R/T Fiction- Golden Confessions

[taylortyme]

This is my story that I wrote for the OC Fiction Challenge, it wasn't the most well written piece out there but I have heard some good things and some bad things, so I am going to post what I originally wrote and then rewrite it into a chapter story that elaborates everything that happened in between that was missing in the story. So please enjoy

Comments

[leesh_17]

Yay more Luke!
Lol,I have serious love for that boy, even if i did make him all emo last fic I wrote.

I'm really looking forward to more of this fic, though I suggest if you want to make it longer, extend this fic, don't just write another chapter, because it seemed a tad rushed at the end.

- L x

extend

[taylortyme]

this story will be cut up and extended out to a bunch of chapter, i am taking this idea that i wrote and rewritting it into chapters, so that you can read about luke and marissa developing and taylor and ryan developing, it was way rushed through the whole story. So like the first part will be written into a chapter and then so on, if you get it kind of, the topics at the top of the page will tell you who are main characters in each chapter so that you pick and choose who you want to read about. i hope you enjoy and thanks for supporting

[marcopolo8170]

I liked this fic and would love for you to extend it. Can't wait for the first chapter. Post soon