Amazing paragraph: "Cara thought about these things, and tried not to, as she kissed Kahlan's neck [...] because she could no longer remember a time when she hadn't wanted to feel them on hers."
So interesting: "For a moment, Cara could swear this power actually had a face and a mind: that it took a good, long look into Cara, before moving on."
Great deal of wonderful ~feelings~ you worked into their coupling. Intimacy on all levels. Well done. Especially the feelings of familiarity...but not.
And nice touch relating Erin's (possible) experiences with Cara's when she was taken...
OMG. I think this part contains my favorite lines: "It's not your fault." "I know," Cara answered tonelessly. "It's yours." I mean, hell yeah! Totally their fault!! Beautiful part, especialy Cara's speech. It sounds totally like her. You capture their natures very well.
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So interesting: "For a moment, Cara could swear this power actually had a face and a mind: that it took a good, long look into Cara, before moving on."
Of course it was a trap.
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Great deal of wonderful ~feelings~ you worked into their coupling. Intimacy on all levels. Well done. Especially the feelings of familiarity...but not.
And nice touch relating Erin's (possible) experiences with Cara's when she was taken...
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I think this part contains my favorite lines:
"It's not your fault."
"I know," Cara answered tonelessly. "It's yours."
I mean, hell yeah! Totally their fault!!
Beautiful part, especialy Cara's speech. It sounds totally like her. You capture their natures very well.
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