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mayireadtoday March 3 2011, 19:29:28 UTC
Awesome: "This is where I leave you. I hope you find a nice filly and have lots of disagreeable, ill-tempered foals."

I hope Adai is alive and comes back.

So true: "Sometimes I think he's more invested in our relationship than we ever were."

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rhyfeddu March 4 2011, 01:26:27 UTC

Wow. That cave confrontation. Wow.

And everyone knows, Cara, not to eat fruit in a fairytale. ;) It never ends well...

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redleather13 March 4 2011, 08:10:47 UTC
The cave scene...I do not even have words.

I hope Adai and at least some of the Mord'sith make it out alive.

"This is where I leave you. I hope you find a nice filly and have lots of disagreeable, ill-tempered foals."
I love Cara talking to her horse and making sure no one else can hear her when she does.

"He's an old man. He needs a hobby besides lighting people on fire."
This had me laughing out loud.

It is 3am, by the way. I should have been sleeping for hours by now. I blame you and your awesome story. I will never be able to sleep when you leave cliffhangers like this and the next part is up.

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jolo_65 March 4 2011, 21:47:26 UTC
I hope some of the Mord'Sith survive - especially Adai...

That cave scene was amazing ... so much emotion, anger and repressed feelings... well done!!

Cara's farewell to her horse had me lol!!!

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meatisadelicacy March 5 2011, 02:17:55 UTC
I love Cara's relationship with her horse. That's my new OTP.

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