Round One Prompt Post

[tdkr_anon]

Round One Is Currently Closed To New Prompts

Welcome to 'Round One' of The Dark Knight Rises Kink Meme.
This round will close when it reaches three thousand comments and after two weeks, another prompt post will open.

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Bane/Talia

[anonymous]

During hot and heavy sex, Bane unexpectedly takes off his mask to go down on Talia for the first time.

He knows he can't hold out like this for more than just some minutes. So first, he fucks her real good like always (with the mask on) until she's almost there - then taking her by sursprise and continuing with his head between her thighs to bring her over the edge.

She is torn between the urge to make him put the mask back on (she can feel he's fighting back the pain that is building with each second) and the need to enjoy his lips and tongue on her, finally.

Basically, this qualifies as "oral quickie" I guess.
I want Bane to go down on Talia like a starving man (because of the time pressure), kinda devouring her with iron will and determination to really do this for her, maybe getting a bit rough because he needs to compensate the growing pain, and with that making her come so fucking hard it was all worth his agony.

Re: Bane/Talia

[nolikereally]

You know I can't resist shit like this. I am all up on this prompt, jaysus.

Re: Bane/Talia

[anonymous]

Totally excited OP here! You'd make so soooooooo happy :)

Re: Bane/Talia

[anonymous]

haha I'm so excited I can't even get out a proper sentence anymore! Of course it was supposed to mean: "You'd make me so happy" ;)

Re: Bane/Talia

[kittykat1979]

Sweet Jesus your brillant for this prompt.

FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 1]

[nolikereally]

This is the first time he has faced a mirror without the anonymity of his mask since the day they lowered him, screaming and jerking, into the Pit

OP here

[anonymous]

I already love this! So much!
A great start, and I'm so happy that you didn't jump right into the hot stuff but actually started prior to that, giving some more background story and setting an athmosphere and all. Let's be honest I'm kind of crazy about the smut to come lol, but this only means I can hope your fill is going to span over a few more chapters which is gooood :D

ok English is not my native language so I can't really express how excited I am for this. But I am totally fired up, believe me! Can't wait for more from you, and thank you thank you thank you for writing this <3

Re: OP here

[nolikereally]

omg I'm so glad you like it! I can't lie, I have to put a bunch of plot in all my porn-- even if it means my fills get REALLY long sometimes. But I suspect this one will only be three or four posts long...

Re: OP here

[anonymous]

I'm not complaining hehe, I love porn with some plot, and even more so when it's as well written as yours :)

FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 2]

[nolikereally]

And yet, she loves him. He knows that he is not his face, and this only bolsters that knowledge: her kisses on the skin around his mask, her sly-eyed teasing, her lithe figure that slips between his sheets at night-- all these things are for him, Bane, and not for what lies under his mask.

He also knows that she has seen him, seen every stage of his healing. And he notices that she has never asked him for even a few seconds without the mask, not even for a single kiss.

He knows what she can't ask for. And he knows, because Talia's deceptive face has never been able to hide a thing from him, that she does want to ask

Re: FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 2]

[nolikereally]

More later, severe ouch is happen.

FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 3]

[nolikereally]

He claws at his mask, half out of his mind, pushing at the straps as he thrusts into her, his head full of half-complete images and memories of pain and so, so much regret.

"What are you doing," she gasps, stilling her hand; he can hear it in her voice, that she is terrified he'll take it off, that somewhere deep inside she wants him to. She can never say it, he thinks, and all caution is gone from him like a shred of paper ripped away by the wind. He pulls, he twists, and the mask is off

Re: FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 3]

[death_ofme]

Oh my gawd I want this fic to marry me.

All the points, just take them. *melts*

Re: FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 3]

[nolikereally]

<33333333

Re: FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 3]

[anonymous]

(OP again)

This is amazing! I can't even tell what I love most about this, every single sentence is just so perfect. And all the little details... the emotions.. it's hot and at the same time very moving, I love it.

Oh and this:
He feels her; he tastes her. It's better than the first sunrise he saw after the pit, and just as much a revelation, salt as tears and coppery as blood and full of her scent, the most familiar things from his memories and yet the most alien, the most new.

So beautiful!

Re: FILL: Our Lips Are Sealed, Bane/Talia - NC-17 [PART 3]

[nolikereally]

yessss! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I can't wait to write the rest of it later today... I'm thinking two more parts? Hopefully I can avoid my tendency to get bogged down in 1000 words of excruciatingly detailed cunnilingus and actually keep the plot moving...