Alt!Ten/Rose, G

[dave7]

Title: A Luckier Man's Life
Author: dave7
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Alt!Ten/Rose
Spoilers: Season Four.
Author's notes: Thanks to Wendy for the Beta.

Summary: Rose is already in the kitchen when you wander in. She’s dressed for the day and you suddenly feel awkward in your dressing gown and slippers

Comments

[erikau]

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!! You're back! And you haven't lost your touch!

I sincerely hope this is just the first of many, I've always enjoyed your writing, and this is no exception.

[clannadlvr]

Oooh this is great. What I really like about it is that you can see how the roles are reversed here. When Rose first joined the Doctor on the TARDIS, it was he who helped her get used to a new existence and then, over time, she became more and more comfortable and started to develop habits. Here? It's the reverse and the Doctor is the one following her lead and building a life. You show that, rather than tell, so effortlessly here in so many ways, which is quite impressive in a story that is mainly words and thoughts.

Quite a lovely little slice of their new life!

[kilodalton]

This is really nice! I can totally see this happening. I read a bunch of your older stuff on here a few months back, and was so happy to see this pop up on my Friends page! =)

[annissag]

Wonderful!

[sleepscribbling]

This is a wonderful glimpse into Rose and the other Doctor's new world, and a sweet blend of the fantastic and mundane. They seem so very happy and natural here.