Tittle: Losing the Bet (100 Fics Challenge) Pairing: Yesung/Eunhyuk Rating: NC 17 Disclaimer: They're not mine Word count: 1347 Prompt: 063/100 Archive: Here A/N: Nhi I hope you like it. *huggles you*
NHI IS A PILE OF MUSHrunawayxxloveeFebruary 2 2009, 04:50:05 UTC
*mems before passing out from overload of... what you call this*
HOMFG, you're mind is a sin. You gave me like two bits but that didn't even come close to this *flails* EEEEEEEEEEE~~~~~ *illogical* I swear, my brain's melted, MELTED! HOT DAMN. What have you done. Mental images of hyuk and the cheerleading outfit preparing himself. OH GOSH SOMEONE STOP ME XDDD uidjkhgijdfkihejokhijrdjkh.
Omg Areli! You're trying to kill me!!! And in the best way possible, I swear. sduikguidkihodkjik. FAIL?! NO WAY.
Hanchul at the end is love. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I can't spazz enough about think. omg. I'm dying, dying
dead. LOVEEE YOUU LOTS. thank you so much, you make me smile. omo omo this diokghieasjkhiwhgkjrshwekbijolkgm <3 <3 <3 AHHHH YEHYUK.
I know!!!! green cheerleader outfit + Hyuk = nosebleed
and LOL! OMG what if Hannie ends up losing? 0_0 Heenim would probably chain him to the bed with all different kinds of chains and have his way with him and yeah *cough* Gald you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Your grammar wasn't that bad. Just some awkward/repetitive phrases, but I think that's everyone.
I liked it. =D, it was pretty hot.
The only thing I would really critique is the big first letter of every paragraph. The very first letter is fine, but I kept wanting to look for the hidden acronym cause you made the letter so conspicuous. XD
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HOMFG, you're mind is a sin. You gave me like two bits but that didn't even come close to this *flails* EEEEEEEEEEE~~~~~ *illogical* I swear, my brain's melted, MELTED! HOT DAMN. What have you done. Mental images of hyuk and the cheerleading outfit preparing himself. OH GOSH SOMEONE STOP ME XDDD uidjkhgijdfkihejokhijrdjkh.
Omg Areli! You're trying to kill me!!! And in the best way possible, I swear. sduikguidkihodkjik. FAIL?! NO WAY.
Hanchul at the end is love. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I can't spazz enough about think. omg. I'm dying, dying
dead. LOVEEE YOUU LOTS. thank you so much, you make me smile. omo omo this diokghieasjkhiwhgkjrshwekbijolkgm <3 <3 <3 AHHHH YEHYUK.
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You can't die! Then who am I going to call adorable and cute?!!!!!!
LOL! your comment is love as always you are just too adorable and I'm so glad you liked it!^^
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The results for the challenge is up~ And I'm sorry but your Hanchul might take a while. No ideas are coming. DD:
LOL, you can call Jenna or Julie or Carey cute. =p
aiudkshgkserg, you're lucky you're adorable or I would be demanding that you stop calling me that. D< I did like it~! :D
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NOOO WAY! YESUNG WON??? YESUNG??? KIM JONGWOON?? KIM JONGWOON OF SUPER JUNIOR+M?? WON AGAINST EUNHYUK??? lol HAHAH
that was hot! seriously! wow
eunhyuk in a cheerleading outfit! hahaha
and greeen is so his color!!!!!!!
so it's true after all. even the shyest of ppl change behind closed doors LOL
haha
ohh hannie! look out! make sure YOU win and not heechul LOL
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I know!!!!
green cheerleader outfit + Hyuk = nosebleed
and LOL! OMG what if Hannie ends up losing? 0_0
Heenim would probably chain him to the bed with all different kinds of chains and have his way with him and yeah *cough*
Gald you liked it! Thanks for reading!
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totally! but this is heechul! he wouldnt use JUST chains! LOL
your welcome! glad i did too!
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*insert perverted hanchul images here*
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I liked it. =D, it was pretty hot.
The only thing I would really critique is the big first letter of every paragraph. The very first letter is fine, but I kept wanting to look for the hidden acronym cause you made the letter so conspicuous. XD
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I just noticed the letter thing. Didn't mean for that to happen. I don't know why it did but anyways thanks so much for reading!!!!
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LOL! Thanks for reading!!!
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That's all I can say!
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Thanks for reading!
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