Commission Halp?

[teahound]

Ok so, I'm having difficulty with this commission pose. x_x Like, majorly. Putting it under a cut since it's porn-related.

Comments

[plastickaiju]

I'm having trouble even deciphering what's going on.

He's laying on her stomach, while she's presumably laying down, but also giving him a foot job while he sits or kneels, while rubbing his back, and he's...asleep? What? ? That's uh... complicated.

Oh, wait, unless it was a "bird's eye" looking down at a bed, that might be the best way to handle it. I was picturing this from the side at first, with him over her, which made it hella confusing.

[/long rambly sleep-deprived comment]

[teahound]

Yeah Dirtiran below did a from-the-side doodle too; I'm waffling between that and a bird's-eye view lol. Gonna keep doodling up concepts today until I get one I like!

But yes. xD The commissioner is VERY nice though, so I'm willing to work with the confusing text.

[dirtiran]

I hate text descriptions for this reason haha. But from what I can gather they want one character belly to belly while laying on their sides.
Bob - head bent and resting against Janes belly
Jane- arms would have to be over bobs shoulders to reach the back?
The foot thing I find a bit confusing due to proportion, but I guess it could work? *brain splodes* XD

I tried to scribble what my mind told me it was, but i dunnooooo XD - http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y221/FrostDragoness/cawk.jpg

[teahound]

Ahh, I hadn't thought of a side-view - I'd been approaching it from a sort of bird's-eye view. This gives me a new perspective on it, thank you! :3

[kath_rathe]

Those were my thoughts exactly, too. I HAVE BEEN BEATEN TO IT.

So that's probably close to what they wanted.

Alternaely, it's never actually said that they're lying down, so they could be sitting up doing this somehow, but that sketch was probably better.

[doki_doki]

Well, if they're "rubbing him gently awake"...Bob at least is probably lying down, since presumably he had just been sleeping.

But yeah, uh, that suggestion sketch made sense. I actually know what it would probably look like from above, but if you just want to go with the one dirtiran did, that works too.

JUST REPLYING TO KATHERINE WITH ALL OF THIS SINCE I KNOW SOL WILL SEE IT ANYWAY.

[kaji_the_kouun]

I did two quick stick figure sketches of it and honestly, coming at it from the side might make the picture more interesting.

Like you can have the one character just resting its head on the others belly thats laying on its back and go from there.

The only tricky thing is getting the feet on the penis to look good. If you want I can try doing a simple out line of how it might look. :)

[teahound]

I think I am gonna go from the side, since it seems more dynamic according to everyone's comments. If you want I'd be fine with that. :3

[growly]

That's a way too specific request, I personally wouldn't have accepted the commission if it had to be exactly as described. If it were me, I'd ask them for a prompt of a general theme/mood, with maybe a little direction on clothing and setting.

My experience with picky customers like that is that they have a VERY specific image in their mind that no artist will ever be able to capture- so they'll never be happy. :/

[teahound]

I accepted it because I have a friend or two who have commissioned him, and while he seems picky in the description, he's apparently very nice to work with and pretty easily pleased. Worst comes to worst, I get a nice challenge lol!