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And with each mile

Dec 12, 2012 20:48

CHAPTER 35: ROOFTOP SEX

Rating: NC-17
Genre: Zaylor / Hancest
Pairing: Zac & Taylor
Credits & many Thanks to: Honor @beyondthethorns
About the story: Zac & Taylor's relationship broke up when they got caught kissing by the press and their career were over in a split of a second. To continue a normal life and to take a break from his brother, ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

elizabeth_ald December 12 2012, 20:13:24 UTC

Best chapter so far! It balanced their relationship thusfar, the romance, their dad, and the heat they needed to have to re-ignite that bond between them. I hope it stays like this for a bit. They're both perfect right in this moment. Love love loved it!

tearingitdown3 December 12 2012, 20:52:53 UTC

What Elizabeth said.

zacgirl1 December 12 2012, 23:17:19 UTC

I agree with Elizabeth, this chapter was perfect and it had all the condiments. We get to see that Zac does care about his father dying, Taylor finally gets to cry and Zac comforted him, there was some romance, and the best of all a lot of amazing sex.
I also hope that their relation keeps growing in a positive way.

I loved it lots 💜💙💗💛💚

iwontbeafool December 12 2012, 23:51:24 UTC

Yes to hot sex that finally happened..! And I agree that this is the best chapter so far. The mention about their desperate need to find the connection and passion between them is so fitting. Although the sex was described as rough, still the whole chapter turned out to be very sweet... <3 <3 <3 More!

And oh please, Zac's stare in the banner is killing me again!

teamzaylor December 14 2012, 01:33:40 UTC

I like this chapter very much too and it was about time for some sex in Chapter 35!!! LOL

Unfortunately I have some bad and some good news for you. The author of the original plot didn't finish the story and left the readers hanging. But we Team Zaylor girls decided to continue the story and hopefully you will not be disappointed with our final chapters. ♥

Thanks again for your constancy of reading!

malfunkshon February 13 2013, 22:25:51 UTC

It suddenly occurred to me that I hadn't caught up with this story.

I agree with elizabeth_ald that it's the best chapter so far - not just because of the sex, but it really does seem really well balanced, and everything is kind of making sense, the characters are more developed and it shows ( ... )