A Figment of His Imagination (10)

Aug 09, 2008 16:51

Title: Good Intentions
Fandom: House m.d.
Summary: This mutated story was inspired by the one scene I got to see of 4x13, so it's kind of spoilery for that particular episode. And yes, now I've seen the rest of the season as well. So spoilery up to Wilson's Heart now.
Rating: What about Teen for this one?
Disclaimer: Written out of fan- ( Read more... )

a figment, house m.d., fanfiction

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sharp2799 August 9 2008, 15:12:15 UTC
I am such a pervert. I thought that first phone call was him with a hooker.

*facepalm*

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teanni August 9 2008, 18:32:30 UTC
Oh! *huggles* You're not a perv ;-) I reread the passage First she can only hear the sound of soft breathing over the line, but before she can start worrying that she’s getting phone calls from some pervert, a shrill female voice dissolves the mystery in a very obtrusive way. “Time for your medicine, sunshine!” the woman croons enthusiastically. A muttered “shit” in a male voice that sounds decidedly familiar follows. It's the descriptive bit plus the word "pervert" that might tip one in that particular direction.

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mem_vermelha August 9 2008, 17:52:41 UTC
Now I'm in a much better mood! Thank you so much, I really needed something to easy my mind off problems.

It's hard for me to imagine Cameron being mean to him after all that happened, with them being together. I guess somehow I picture things going on a different direction, had she been the one to go to that bar.

I think it's idealistic me wishing their relationship would be something more. And if Cuddy was there, Cameron just had to be, you know? Anyways, I'm rambling already.

All this was just to say I'm glad she was there with him.

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teanni August 9 2008, 18:25:53 UTC
See, that's what always bugged me about Wilson's Heart. That Cameron wasn't with House in the last scene. After all she was there after he got shot. So why not this time? It just doesn't seem like her. They tried to sell her to us as a caring (also slightly over-caring), gentle character and then she's not supposed to be there?! I don't think so *shakes her head* But I guess, that's the writers way of foreshadowing Huddy, which at this point in the series is not very appealing to me. IMO Cuddy needs to regrow her backbone desperately...I loved her in season one, but now she's reduced to a pale image of her former self. I don't feel the chemistry between those two. Not anymore.

Since the finale was kind of unsatisfactory from a House/Cam perspective, I try to fix it for myself ;-)(for you?) They'll get to the forgiveness part, because she loves him. Same goes for Wilson in season five. Maybe I'm a bit of an idealist there, but I do believe it can/might/will happen.

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mem_vermelha August 10 2008, 01:53:41 UTC
Wilson's heart hurt me in more ways than one, but the fact Cameron searched for Wilson and didn't bother to do the same with House bugs me. Bugs me in the sense that for the first time I was able to pinpoint she might be truly over him...

As much as I hate Cuddy around House, and completely agree Cuddy is lacking some backbone, I respect her for being there. Actually, I think that anyone who could get over themselves and realize he needed someone deserves my respect and consideration ( ... )

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teanni August 10 2008, 21:06:40 UTC
There will be duck sweet sour in the next chapter. One can hardly have proper angst with duck sweet sour in the same piece of writing, right? ;-)

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house_addicted August 9 2008, 18:27:17 UTC
Also Anrufbeantworter kam dran, aber Ente süß- sauer nicht xD
Entweder hab ich es überlesen, ich lese es einfach nochmal... ^^

House scheint es wirklich zu versuchen.
Weniger Sarkasmus = Concerned Cameron. Awesome chapter and well done.

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teanni August 9 2008, 18:36:51 UTC
Hmmm...stimmt die Ente ist noch nicht geflogen. Irgendwie hat sie da noch nicht reingepasst. Vielleicht beim nächsten Kapitel. Definitiv muß ich die aber noch einbauen.

Nochmal lesen ist immer gut :-D

Natürlich macht uns weniger Sarkasmus besorgt :-) Wenn House als nächstes kleine Hündchen bei sich zu Hause aufnimmt, sollte Cam extrem besorgt sein.

(BTW Hast Du schon mal Dr. Slippery auf Comedy Central gesehen? Da sieht man Hugh Lauries attraktive Hinteransicht ;-) Nicht schlecht. Gar nicht schlecht...)

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house_addicted August 9 2008, 21:13:53 UTC
Ja zum lesen ist jetzt leider keine zeit, bzw. keine lust. Bin grad in einer watching-phase anstatt ner reading-phase. xD

Kleine Hündchen???okay... xD Wird House etwa Mr. Nice-Guy?!ô_O

Türlich hab ich DAS schon gesehen :)
Jeden Sonntag um 19. Uhr und Samstags um 17.30 :DD

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athousandsmiles August 10 2008, 00:09:39 UTC
Heh! House and his *I don't need anyone* facade are cracking. I'm glad he called her and that she came. Also, I really want Cuddy to keep her pillow fluffing hands off of him.

Great chapter. :D

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teanni August 10 2008, 20:56:06 UTC
Me too. Bad Cuddy. But he just said it to wind up Cameron. That's his job after all ;-)

Thanks, hon'. Glad you enjoyed.

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amypinkpoison August 10 2008, 16:18:03 UTC
I love it!! The first phonecall that kinda freaked her out made me laugh, when it was a dead giveaway it was him when the nurse's voice sounded on his end LOL.

This is yet again brilliantly written, and I love how there's little moments in there even when it's a completely platonic scene. There's ripples under there but the water still looks pretty calm. It was great to see how he said he was fine but she heard the desperation and the unspoken need in his voice. She reads him so well.

*facepalm* it's never easy for these two is it! lol

That ending was beautiful too, can't wait for more!! :D:D

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teanni August 10 2008, 21:04:56 UTC
Nope, it never is. See if Cameron had a little less self-restraint she'd already be all over him doing the whole blanket wrapping, coco cooking and cookie feeding thing I suggested before ;-)

The next chapter is at 80% and nearing completion. And it is/was fun writing it. I even squeezed some odd Who reference in. (I've been drinking coke again, that's were that enthusiasm comes from. I'm finally awake.)

And Gods, I've finally gotten around to seeing Fortysomething...Hugh Laurie's bottom (The opposite of top) is...highly inspirational for writing fanfic :) I wish I had an icon of that...

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