A Figment of His Imagination (11)

Aug 12, 2008 19:48

Title: The Duck Has Landed
Fandom: House m.d.
Summary: This mutated story was inspired by the one scene I got to see of 4x13, so it's kind of spoilery for that particular episode. And yes, now I've seen the rest of the season as well. So spoilery up to Wilson's Heart now.
Rating: What about Teen for this one?
Disclaimer: Written out of fan- ( Read more... )

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amypinkpoison August 12 2008, 18:43:43 UTC
“Cameron, Cameron, Cameron…” He’s shaking his head jokingly and though she can’t see it, she can hear it rather well. “I’m starting to think they did some strange Frankenstein-brain-swap instead of that deep brain stimulation. Oh, I’m so mad right now, let me tell you! I seem to be stuck with all that yucky niceness! Now what am I going to do with that?”

“You’ll just be my lobby art,” she smiles. “Come to think of it, you do make a pretty decent piece of lobby art.”

I totally ADORE it!!
It made me grin like an idiot reading that and visualising it like I always do when I read fics lol. It's really brilliantly in-character and that end past is perfect.

I love the whole exchange with the delivery boy. Haha. Very amusing! And it's JUST like him to order stuff and then leave her to pay for it. LOL!

Can't wait for more!!!

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teanni August 13 2008, 09:33:50 UTC
Actually, that's one of my favourite parts as well. I just like it when they're teasing each other.

My craving for Chinese food is very subtle in this part, innit? :) Ever since I heard that the athletes taking part in the Olympics get Peking duck everyday, I can't help myself. I want Chinese food. But not for 30$, mind you.

Thanks :-) Glad you liked it.

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athousandsmiles August 12 2008, 18:56:37 UTC
First, the title of this one made me LOL after reading the chapter.

You do such a great job of capturing Cameron's mix of exasperation and affection when it comes to House.

He’s like the Tin Man in the Wizard of Oz. Doubtlessly if he banged his hand against his chest there would be that depressing ‘clonk clonk’ noise.

Loved that little bit right there. And I liked House's thoughts about Cuddy, how he doesn't mind her company but it's just not the same as Cameron's. I wish the show writers would realize that too.

As usual, I can't wait for more. :D

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teanni August 13 2008, 09:37:29 UTC
I really had no idea what to pick as a title at first...Initially I wanted to keep all those titles themed, but I failed eventually.

I really couldn't help putting in the reference about the Tin Man. The Wizard of Oz was my favourite movie as a kid. I always liked the Tin Man best and Scarecrow.

Thanks :-D Stay tuned. More to come!

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house_addicted August 12 2008, 22:51:29 UTC
Geheimnis mit der Ente ist gelöst xD
Und das House nicht bezahlt hat, ist auch gut so. Ansonsten wäre er ja nicht House.^^
Well, wieder einmal awesome chapter. And please update soon.

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teanni August 13 2008, 09:40:27 UTC
Yup, die Ente ist gelandet. Hätte vorher nicht reingepasst. Da war der Drama!Drama!Drama!anteil noch recht hoch.
Das ist schwierig. House will sich ja einschleimen, aber gleichzeitig sollte er lieber nicht zu nett sein, sonst wird es unglaubwürdig. Gut, dass es dieser geklappt hat.

Dankschön. Werd mich bemühen bald wieder upzudaten.

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sharp2799 August 13 2008, 02:01:54 UTC
$30?!? That better be some fabulous food! ROTFL

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teanni August 13 2008, 09:44:19 UTC
Of course it is. ;-D Two stars, you know...

So, I did get that about right, because we've got Euros over here and I tried hard to guess the price for a pricy Asian restaurant. The one with golden chopsticks :)

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teanni August 13 2008, 09:45:31 UTC
Oh, that's good! Glad I could cheer you up. Fanfic usually helps me too.

Hope the rest of your day will be better!!!

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