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Fic: More Ways It Could Have Begun

Feb 03, 2008 16:04

Title: More Ways It Could Have Begun
Characters/Pairing: 8059
Word Count: 462
Excerpt: “It takes a while for Gokudera to notice how hungrily Yamamoto watches him.”

( A warning for swearing!Gokudera as per usual. )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, yamamoto/gokudera

Comments 15

raiyo_kun February 3 2008, 05:44:19 UTC

These are beautiful.
The first one is my favorite.

teapoit February 3 2008, 05:55:47 UTC

Thank you. <3

devicing February 3 2008, 05:51:07 UTC

Unf, I love the way you write these two ♥ The first part really had their characters down, what with the bluntness the two exhibit towards each other XD In short, I loved it ♥

teapoit February 3 2008, 06:11:21 UTC

Aww, thank you ♥ They have an awesome dynamic so I don't think I could ever get tired of them.

binni February 3 2008, 06:04:11 UTC

I was just thinking 'I need some good 8059 right now...' and voila! It's like fellow 8059 fans answer eachothers' calls XD

These were awesome and amazing love! I can't decide which one I love most, but the description in the second is absolute win.

teapoit February 3 2008, 08:40:01 UTC

Haha, I'm glad I could help you out. :3

Thank you dear. ♥

downpours February 3 2008, 12:06:46 UTC

They were all awesome, but the first one was just... WOW. (:

I love your characterization for the two of them. :D

teapoit February 3 2008, 12:30:47 UTC

I had fun writing the first one. xD Thank you~

hehe_05 February 3 2008, 16:51:53 UTC

The 2nd one is so sweet. The Goku!attitude in the first one is just Goku. And did our favorite bomber lose one hand in the last one?

teapoit February 5 2008, 06:41:24 UTC

I was in an unusually fluffy mood (apart from the last bit). xD I haven't quite decided whether he lost the hand entirely, or just the movement, but I don't think I've exhausted the scenario yet. ^^;

Thanks for reading~