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Fic: Saving Gokudera

Feb 05, 2008 17:19

Title: Saving Gokudera
Characters/Pairing: 8059, but it could just as easily be gen.
Word Count: 534
Excerpt: “Yamamoto is like the shock of someone thumping him in the lungs and breaking his ribs to make him breathe.”

( One story which I chose to write in sections. Yamamoto swears, and it's all a bit angst-ridden and disturbing. Possible spoiler regarding Gokudera's past. )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, yamamoto/gokudera

Comments 13

dizzyizzy191 February 5 2008, 06:51:26 UTC

Ooh, all so good!

'The throb of salt on jagged skin shoots just enough adrenaline to ebb the tears as the four-year-old prances barefoot in the sand, presses the shell to his ear and then hurls it into the sea.

It’s been a year. The boy is still convinced his mother’s sailed away on a grand adventure. He whispers secrets to her and folds her paper boats cross-legged on the beach. His soul is shared equally between her and his piano; '

Especially liked this bit =D

teapoit February 6 2008, 09:05:19 UTC

Thank you. :3

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teapoit February 6 2008, 09:06:16 UTC

Haha, I'm fickle. I'm a fan of almost any pairing that's well-written. Thank you. <3

cupid_tea February 5 2008, 09:22:03 UTC

OMG! I am so moved! Lovely!

The second part was so great and angsty.

teapoit February 6 2008, 09:10:06 UTC

Thank you! ♥

endou February 5 2008, 10:02:57 UTC

As always, superb work and simply beautiful reading. ♥

teapoit February 6 2008, 09:12:30 UTC

Oh, thank you. ♥

rodya February 5 2008, 11:20:58 UTC

Ahh, you're amazing and just brightened my morning. ♥♥♥

I love the imagery in your writing. It's absolutely beautiful~
Excellent, excellent work!

teapoit February 6 2008, 09:13:51 UTC

And you brightened up my evening with that comment. Thanks so much. ♥