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Fic: Sound and Fury

Feb 07, 2008 22:45

Title: Sound and Fury
Characters/Pairing: Gokudera
Word Count: 546
Excerpt: “The boy charges at sandcastles as though he’s demolishing his father’s empire, kicks the waves and dares the gods to strike him where he stands.”

( Warning for angst and a possible spoiler regarding Gokudera's past. Same spoiler as last time. )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, gen

Comments 9

cupid_tea February 7 2008, 19:15:04 UTC

That was interesting.

Good imagery!

teapoit February 7 2008, 23:22:20 UTC

Thanks hun~

makeste February 7 2008, 19:22:28 UTC

This is incredible. I feel guilty because I've been meaning to comment on your fics before now; you are an amazing writer. You have a gift for creating perfect imagery and metaphors that just smack you right in the face--charging at sandcastles as though he's demolishing his father's empire--and make you go, wow. And your characterization is always spot on. My favorite part of this is the paragraph describing Dera's insecurities and his fear that he'll be deemed unworthy if Tsuna ever learns about his past. But the whole thing is amazingly good.

Hope you don't mind if I friend you. :)

teapoit February 8 2008, 01:23:42 UTC

Thank you. I'm really flattered, especially when I know there are so many more talented writers out there.

And of course not; I've friended you back. :)

prosodic_repose February 8 2008, 04:29:10 UTC

Wowie wow, you are an amazing writer. ♥

I'm definitely mem'ing this for future indulgences.

teapoit February 10 2008, 11:44:44 UTC

Thank you very much! ♥

demanawaits February 9 2008, 00:43:53 UTC

Damn this makes me want to get an emo-Gokudera icon. D:

This is -

This is oh god. <3
I'm writing this comment now but I can't seem to write it out coherently. This needs a rereading. This definitely does.
I love the part about hate. There's only so much hate that a person can give... I've always thought it was more fear than hate.

Gokudera is tired of being unworthy.
The mafia makes Gokudera unworthy. He's smart in school, and popular. It's odd that the mafia ruins Gokudera's life and still he continues to hold on to it. It's like family; it's blood and when the cancer gets in to your bloodstream it'll never go away.

You're such a powerful writer. <3

teapoit February 11 2008, 11:12:44 UTC

Dera is all emo. xD

Your comments make me speechless. I can't thank you enough for them. I love reading your interpretations and your praise makes me glow. ♥

anonymous March 19 2008, 07:55:02 UTC

Good God, what a Gokudera Gokudera.

I stand amazed.