Fic: This House of Ours

Mar 08, 2008 19:08

OOKIKU FURIKABUTTE aka OOFURI. It's a must-see. I have never 'aww'ed or laughed so hard in my life. I would write a lengthy pimp post full of caps but just one episode and your butts will be hooked and you will know exactly what I mean ( Read more... )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, gen

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demanawaits March 8 2008, 18:08:57 UTC
There is nothing wrong with me.
Nothing wrong, nothing wrong, I suppose we all have our tux.

Sad, ahhhh~
The Gokudera family is dysfunctional. D: D: <3

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teapoit March 8 2008, 23:07:03 UTC
Nothing wrong, nothing wrong, I suppose we all have our tux~ ♪ Ushishishi.
...I think you are maybe Bel in disguise. o____O

I hope Amano-sensei works out some epic arc involving Gokudera's dad/famiglia~ I'm hoping it's the next arc actually, since Bianchi was all "Message from father BUT I'LL TELL YOU WHEN YOU GET BACK AND KEEP EVERYONE IN SUSPENSE." I'd like to know some names at least.

<33

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ansibs March 8 2008, 18:10:56 UTC
Simple and cleanly understandable. Says so much in so little words unlike me, I just go on and on and don't shut up.

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teapoit March 8 2008, 23:15:22 UTC
But long fics are beautiful. I wish I could write less sparsely. <3

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kill_me_faster March 9 2008, 01:06:53 UTC
No no, do not want! ;____; You leave your style the way it is, you! That's one of the things I adore about your writing. The ability to convey a lot in a short span of time is really something admirable. And I always walk away from your fics feeling satisfied, regardless of the length. ^___^ So no dissing yourself, dammit!

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teapoit March 9 2008, 10:50:40 UTC
...*melts*

adjksdhksf; I'll try my best! *____*

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platinumpair March 8 2008, 18:22:34 UTC
Loved it.

[ For his birthday, Hayato’s father gifts him with packets of plastic soldiers and a toy gun (and a dead mother, but he doesn't know that yet). He moves steadily from 9/10 to 20/20; progresses from foam bullets to rubber bands, rarely off the mark.

I loved this part the most. What does the 9/10 to 20/20 mean?

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___sasuka March 8 2008, 20:05:30 UTC
I think it might be referring to eyesight...?

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teapoit March 8 2008, 23:20:45 UTC
Thank you. <3

I was referring to accuracy; at first he could hit nine times out of ten, and then twenty times out of twenty. Maybe I should have made it clearer - I still haven't learned that things that make sense in my head sometimes just don't. ^^;

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kill_me_faster March 9 2008, 00:58:36 UTC
jdlafkd;f;ladskflads;ld'sf

KEYBOARD MASH OF LOVE. I positively adore the gen fics you write for this fandom. Well, the SECKS, too, but no one writes subtle, creative gen like you do.

Which - AH, I LIKE THE STYLE FOR THIS, TOO. I like that the non-italicized parts seemed to have more 'oomph' than the ones that were highlighted. Was this your intention? *hopes she hasn't misinterpreted* The world...totally needs more serious fics dealing with Gokudera and Bianchi. I love them oh-so much. *___* But not as much as I love youuuuu~!

*ultimately, fails at leaving reviews*

Which, oh, I did get the reply you left me on eternally_sky, I just haven't replied to it yet because every time I see the replies on that page I am overwhelmed with BLUSH and LOVE.

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teapoit March 9 2008, 08:28:26 UTC
fajlksdjg;hjd

*MASHES BACK* Thank you so much!

You were right about the italics - I was playing around with tenses and the immediacy of it; trying to mix Bianchi's bluntness with her memories of Gokudera but as usual he stole the show~ I-I think it's my obsession talking. @w@ I♥U toooo~ orz

*ultimately, fails at answering reviews XDD*

Ah~ there's no need to force yourself to reply! *flails* I never know what to say when people give me nice comments; it's so flattering, haha. Just keep writing gorgeous fics and I'll be happy. ^^

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arrankaara March 9 2008, 01:09:48 UTC
WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME WHY????

♥ Boy!Hayato breaks my heart so. And your writing make it bleed so hard I think I'll need blood transfusion once I finish commenting. I honestly think that Hayato is Amano's favourite character, simply because it seems as though she gives him more depth and history than any other character [no i'm not being biased WHY ARE YOU STARING AT ME???]

But this is lovely, dear. Lovely and heartbreaking and just so poignant. Thank you for writing this. ♥

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teapoit March 9 2008, 10:39:28 UTC
B-But I'm not! *wrings hands*

I agree. I think Amano's favourites are probably Tsuna and Gokudera. It would make sense for her to be more attached to the characters she started out with and they both get the most development (and panels). XDD; [eh?! i'm not staring, i swear! *is a gokutard of the highest order*]

Unnn, thank you so much~ <33

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