Fic: Twigs of Trees

[teapoit]

I seem to have misplaced my voice. Target 186 was released this morning which made me feel a bit better about it (RYOHEI=INSTANTFANGIRLMUSH) but voices are not supposed to run away from you for no good reason. The weather hasn't even turned yet

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[3radicated]

Firsly, D: I hope you feel better soon and recover your voice. <3 Ah and chapter 186- TYL!RYOHEI. As if the Kangaryuu wasn't extreme enough, the last double paged is just pure awesome 8D Geez, he's so grown up now, though his passion remains forever maxed. ! Ahaha and Gokudera!
/lameness

Back to topic- ohgosh. This was really, really sweet. You express the characters so very well; the characters' opinions are conveyed so amazingly. And, reading your writing, it's not hard at all to picture the characters, picture the scenes- your writing is just damn powerful, yeah! :DD! Beautiful.

Not just this fic, but them all- I really enjoyed reading them thoroughly. The descriptions are so clear, and vivid. Your choice of words, your metaphors and all... So, I really suck at reviewing and expressing just how much I like your work |D;; But eheh you get that I love them a lot right? C:

I'm really grateful that there are such talented writers like you in the Reborn fandom~

[teapoit]

Thanks dear. A good night's sleep seems to have done the trick; I don't sound much like myself today but at least I'm sounding. XD Ahh, Ryohei and Gokkun are such dorks. My love for Reborn is officially renewed - I thought we'd never get past the King Mosca fiasco not that I don't adore dyingwill!Tsuna but he and Spanner just weren't doing a whole lot for me. ^^;

ANYWAY, compared to the other writers in this fandom, I'm really not that great! but I'll happily eat up your review because I'm a turbo-powered compliment-vacuum. 8D

[3radicated]

That's great to hear~ (: *hugs; cause maybe they can squeeze your voice back out* ;D Like, just pretend you didn't see that. YEEEEEAH! Hahaha I'm really wondering just what the other seven things Gokudera has on his 'to-see' list are XD I feel you there, seriously. :|

NAW YOU ARE. If my rereading your stuff over a couple of times even means anything~ Thanks for the links to your recs, by the way (:

Added back :DD but admittedly, m-my journal's dead. One of the slow people who still uses blogger >>

[icedcandy]

I was all teary-eyed by [ Promises aren’t always for keeping, but she holds the bundled baby in her arms and makes one anyway, ‘I won’t let go of you as long as I live.’ ].

I always seem to fall in love with stories about Gokkun!maman. I absolutely adore her. And, this one is just so wonderful.

[teapoit]

Ack. I'm not sure that making people cry is necessarily a good thing but... :3? It would probably be a useful ability in RL. XDD;

Thank you. It's no secret that I think Gokkun!maman is the best thing since lightly-toasted sandwiches. W-We haven't talked in a while, have we? *paws at*

[icedcandy]

I think it can be a good thing. It just goes to show how good you are at carrying over emotions. ^^

Heehee, lightly-toasted sandwishes? I agree. xD
Oh, I know. =3= I've missed talking to you.

[teapoit]

You have reduced me into a blushing mess, with your many nice adjectives. orz

I'm really grateful to receive feedback about subject matter; I get caught into the trap of pretty words and run-on sentences a lot without thinking too much about what I'm saying.

Thank you again for the comment. Reading your opinion is always interesting and happy-inducing. :3

[hotgimmick12]

I was all teary eyed towards the ending. I really like Gokudera's mom and I love to picture how Gokudera would be if he stayed with his mom. Another Tsuna?

[teapoit]

Thank you. I don't think Gokkun could ever turn out completely like Tsuna (he's too warm and squishy XD) but he'd probably be a lot happier.

[bunniblu]

yay!
i absolutely love when you write goku's momma, you always go into such depth when you write her!
:D

[teapoit]

Thank you. <3