Fic: 16.5°C

[teapoit]

In headaches and in worry
Vaguely life leaks away,
And Time will have his fancy
To-morrow or to-day.The truth is I changed persons and tenses a couple of times before settling on second, present, so, haha, please tell me if you see anything odd. In relation to the title, 16.5 degrees is fairly chilly for the hotter months around here (I SPEAK NOT

Comments

[ricordi]

Love the perspective. Gives - man, I love the you touch because it's so damn intimate. So close you can feel his whimpers against your own mouth, and it's just so descriptive.

I love the description on Gianni's hi-res screens. Just - shows them caged in the underground without referencing directly to it.

This - this is just so beautiful. When I read it I felt it, felt the beautiful metaphors, the imagery, and it was just so real.

So pretty auuuggh. Tiaaa. <33 You make me wanna write 8059 again. ;_; <3

[teapoit]

Firstly, your icon. *drools* <3

Approval of the second person = thank god. It just seemed awkward and expository when I had it in regular old third person because I was describing Gokudera and then Yamamoto and Gokudera in the eyes of Yamamoto and it all got brain-breaky. So I switched. XD

*nuzzles* Wah, thank youuu.

YOU TOTALLY SHOULD JILLLL. I got halfway through your drabbles and GUHHED. I so missed your writing, you AP-taking octopus. *sniffles*

[teapoit]

That's my favourite line as well. |D

Thank you very much! Your icon is adorable btw. ♥

[anonymous]

XDDD thanks!

[whitebombshell]

oh hun I don't care if this is old I have been out of fandom and MISSED THIS LOVELY EDITION TO YOUR COLLECTION OF LOVELY FICS.

This was heatbreaking in the best way possible. <333333333333

I can honestly say that reading this was infinitely better than doing my homework. And you inspired me to write moar 8059.

Never stop writing seriously. Your stuff is such a treat. <3

[teapoit]

Nuuuu, I haven't seen you in so long! ;___; *clings*

It is indeed a sad fact of life that LJ pwns study any day. I'll be looking forward to new fic from you~ *prods for Ryohiba continuation*

Thank you so much bb. <3