Fic: Trespasser

[teapoit]

They will try to tell you that your toast is burnt, that your top is too bright, that you smile too much or dream too much and this is the part where you say STFU, I’ll do whatever I please. But only sometimes, because they have a dozen nasty words to call someone like you and your skin is not as thick as you’d like

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[teapoit]

Ah, what a nice thing to start the day with. It's so shiny and optimistic~

Thank you. :3 aiuta is a dear and just recced me one.

[aiuta]

You know I don't even need to tell you how much I loved this. <3 But post it to the comm too, it's better than 98% of what's being posted there anyway. 8D

And Shamal/Goku's mum fic? Here you go. 8D

[teapoit]

I don't think I've spoken to you since you hiatused~ D: How are youuu? *hugs*

D'aww, thank you. :D It's just, I feel bad linking to my journal for four paragraphs. xD

asdkfjld;l you are wonderful. *___*

[aiuta]

It's been so long. >: I'm okaay *hugs*

Ha, I understand that the length seems to be getting in the way, but you know. It's quality, not quantity. |D

So are you. <3 Unfortunately, it's the only one I've seen. Except yours, lol.

[makeste]

I'm actually glad that this was so short, because as soon as I finished it I wanted to read it again. There were so many lines I loved; you have this way of calling attention to little details that just really complete whatever picture you're painting.

Pockets filled with stolen cash, illicit funds - no great loss if the doctor is not in, he tells himself, knock, knock, knocking - can't explain away the hot knot in his chest at the sight of that ugly mug, or tears inexcusable from a thirteen-year-old boy. It's jet lag, he says, and Shamal snorts, drags him in by the hair, gruff and unbearably gentle.

Sob I love this. <3

[teapoit]

Thank you. :D It's so fuzzy-inducing when people tell me they like my brevity.

*noms on*

[kiku]

Aww, this is amazing. I love the tone of this. Shamal and Gokudera definitely need more genfic. :[

[teapoit]

Thank you love. <33

Shamal really lacks SRS BSNS love. He's such a cracky perv that we don't see much of it. So sad. >__>

[cleartempest]

I like how you wrote this! There as just so much between them in this short fic, And your writing is so niiice! That first paragraph was like interesting to the extreme.

[teapoit]

Thanks! After I wrote it, I thought with all the references to machinery it might apply more to Spanner or Shouichi (not that Gokkun isn't an engineering dork in his own right XD) but as usual I kept going. orz

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