Tell me what you see ch.3

[tearsofpearls4u]

Comments

[weerainbow]

*sighs* oh poor unhappy Yoochun...my heart's breaking for him. Shocking he could get to such a state. But I'm glad Junsu's melting away the layers of cold and warming his heart again :o)
It's lovely!!
<3

[tearsofpearls4u]

omo...

and now? dlaskdjahfjdfkf.......

i have no enddddddddd *sobs*

[weerainbow]

don't worry sweetie...the end will come, just give those boys time to tell you what they're gonna do ;o)
<3

[tearsofpearls4u]

uh huh.... failing that the readers will tell me huh?

i had equal amounts of 'continue with the angst' and 'gosh end this already and get to the smut!'

what do you think?

[weerainbow]

hmmm can I be awkward and say a bit of both? I think it could be a bit much to jump straight to smut and just leave all the rest hanging...you've built an emotional piece here and I think it would be nice to continue that somehow.
dunno if that helps or just confuses you more but I tried *o*

[tearsofpearls4u]

no i figured as much honey~ i couldnt jump to smut if i tried!

you reassured what i was thinking so atleast i can continue a bit more on the angst angle without feeling like im rambling... ok next time you're on im going to impose on you for 'beta' time
(i have the majority of it finished so...) doesnt have to be anything technical... just feedback on whether it flows kay? boy iv never struggled so much with a fic!

[jaehos_luv]

spot!

[tearsofpearls4u]

erm ok?... *hearts*

[lareien_lacroix]

ommo
T_T

chunnie why he has to suffer so much!!

at least Junsu is now for help him!!

I love it!
thank for your time!!