i'm so glad i was able to start my day with THIS. woots. nothing like a little smart to wake you senseless♥ (it's okay because i forget to leave spots at times, but leaving spots has become a habit^^) i LOVE it as much as i love you~ i really like how it started out careful and hesitant then just losing themselves in the heat of passion♥ the last line is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ they really are destined to complete each other♥
sorry i took so long to finish reading.oh, and the computer screen that freezes on me every now and then is not helping my head is a bit of a windows95 today but when the passion really kicked in, the words took no time at all to get registered. might i add that it is hothothot?♥ having well-detailed smex along with the magic of imagination can really kill the braincells >////<
the ending is very nicely written. i'm glad this ended on a very pretty note♥
im glad you liked it punkin... this ending took so much time to write that towards the end the words were getting jumbled in my head.
The smex was (accepts defeat, i will never be able to write explicit explicit smut.... oh well)
It was still too choppy and abrupt for my liking but i couldnt edit it anymore, my head was hurting lol I had to end it on a fluffy note cos.... its yoosu!!!
And you you you... why does fluff come so easily to you? eurgh, the poem one? loooved it soo much *babbles inane thoughts*
*warm smile points your way* Ahhh you made me fall for this story so much, and fall for YooSu which not many people can do! I'm privileged to be a small part of it ;o)
This part was so in keeping with all the awesomeness of the rest, well done, and even took it to another level. I love the gradual transition, the way you didn't rush into the action but let it build up naturally. So sweet!
Thank you for including me in your writing process ^^ I'll be here if you need me another time sweetie. <33333333
i adore you even more now, you know that right? aigoo... sho much cuteness and oh so quaint. BISCUITS ALIVE!!!? did i get it right? my memory is 'pants' at the moment *chuckles to self*
thankyou so much for letting me bounce everything off you before posting, helps an insane amount getting feedback off a trusted source...
*facepalms@thetypos* i couldnt bear to go through it again once id finished writing,the theme of self harming put me in full on angstage mode for reals!
a happy ending which hopefully wasn't a cop out... i debated whether to end it on the same sombre tone it started off in...idk hopefully the ending still flowed and wasnt too much of an abrupt 'happy ever after'
thy do complete each other dont they...how they eventually caught up in the burning passion btw them...and with that tomorrow will be a brand new day for them both :D
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way to fast for me... i was just about to save your spot!!
(gosh sometimes my slowness is beyond funny)
hope you like it honey
*bites fingernails*
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(it's okay because i forget to leave spots at times, but leaving spots has become a habit^^)
i LOVE it as much as i love you~
i really like how it started out careful and hesitant then just losing themselves in the heat of passion♥ the last line is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ they really are destined to complete each other♥
sorry i took so long to finish reading.oh, and the computer screen that freezes on me every now and then is not helping my head is a bit of a windows95 today but when the passion really kicked in, the words took no time at all to get registered. might i add that it is hothothot?♥ having well-detailed smex along with the magic of imagination can really kill the braincells >////<
the ending is very nicely written. i'm glad this ended on a very pretty note♥
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im glad you liked it punkin... this ending took so much time to write that towards the end the words were getting jumbled in my head.
The smex was (accepts defeat, i will never be able to write explicit explicit smut.... oh well)
It was still too choppy and abrupt for my liking but i couldnt edit it anymore, my head was hurting lol
I had to end it on a fluffy note cos.... its yoosu!!!
And you you you... why does fluff come so easily to you? eurgh, the poem one? loooved it soo much
*babbles inane thoughts*
and white lies... *still crying*
*squishes the awesome you*
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Ahhh you made me fall for this story so much, and fall for YooSu which not many people can do! I'm privileged to be a small part of it ;o)
This part was so in keeping with all the awesomeness of the rest, well done, and even took it to another level. I love the gradual transition, the way you didn't rush into the action but let it build up naturally. So sweet!
Thank you for including me in your writing process ^^ I'll be here if you need me another time sweetie.
<33333333
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i adore you even more now, you know that right? aigoo... sho much cuteness and oh so quaint. BISCUITS ALIVE!!!? did i get it right? my memory is 'pants' at the moment *chuckles to self*
thankyou so much for letting me bounce everything off you before posting, helps an insane amount getting feedback off a trusted source...
*huggles*
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yay you read it, hope you liked it.
and now the rest of the day awaits so go enjoy whatever the day brings your way (hopefully all good things)
*hugs*
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*hearts*
*facepalms@thetypos*
i couldnt bear to go through it again once id finished writing,the theme of self harming put me in full on angstage mode for reals!
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i debated whether to end it on the same sombre tone it started off in...idk hopefully the ending still flowed and wasnt too much of an abrupt 'happy ever after'
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Congratz on finishing this :)
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and thankyou for reading (and bearing with this! lol)
YES YOOSU DO COMPLETE EACH OTHER (denies otp bias here lol...)
*hearts*
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