Story writing

Apr 13, 2005 18:25

hey, i was home sick today so i was going to work on my homework but then i got a little bored so i wrote a short story so hear it is and please respond and tell me if it is good ( be honest) i might enter the short story contest next year and want to know is that would be a total waste of time. so hear goes ( Read more... )

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discolounge April 14 2005, 00:27:28 UTC
It's a good start, but it needs editing; you have several run on sentences, as well as some typos. Let me know if you're interested in developing this.

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