[Naruto] "The Other Side" 03/?

[prada_g]

Title: The Other Side (03/?)
Rating: T (AU, Language)
Archived @ Master List
Summary: Sequel to Never Ever. Spending a lifetime in the Sand Village has taught Naruto everything about being ideal shinobi, but upon his return to the Leaf Village, he will learn that there are still far too many things he does not know.

Comments

[niccy07]

YAH! You updated! I have to say, I was very suprised about the direction you took the story. It honestly feels like a story from the cannon, with the characters dealing with personal problems, while trying to complete a mission.

Still, I love the idea of the Kiyubi actuall escaping Naruto. I have to say, Jiraiya brining up Gaara was a low blow though. Still, it makes sense considering who he is. I really hope this means your still planning to continue this fic? *puppy eyes* I only found the update by accident *lol* your links been sitting in my favorites files since last year. Anyway, I just want you to know that this fic has some amazing writing. I can see your talent not only in characterization,but also in storytelling.

[niccy07]

sorry, just to note, I also love the relationship he has with the Sand Siblings, especially Gaara. The brotherly bonds between them is wonderful and I was sad to see them seperated.

[prada_g]

Ooh, thank you!! To be honest, I had no idea how it would go when I first started the sequel--which is why it took (takes) me so long to update. I am definitely continuing on, but it comes in trickles or surges, so I can't say when for sure. ^^;

Thank you again for your compliments! Characterization is something I always try to be careful with (which basically means I play out a lot of 'what if' scenarios in my head) so when someone notices, it makes me silly-happy. XD