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You And I: Retracing

Jul 31, 2011 17:25

Title: You And I: Retracing
Author: Ninalyn/technicolornina
Fandom: Adam Lambert
Pairing/Characters: Adam Lambert, Kris Allen, Katy Allen (past), Brad Bell, various and sundry OCs
Word Count: 8728
Story Rating: R
Chapter Rating: R. Adam likes to swear. Angel likes to swear even more.
Story Summary: Seven years after Idol, Adam and Kris and their lives have both ( Read more... )

status: in progress, fandom: adam lambert, character: angel traynor, ship: adam/oc, character: adam lambert, fanfiction, nina uses too many tags, character: kris allen, title: you and i, character: jerry mcallister, fandom!, writing, ship: adam/kris, series: you and i, character: brad bell, type: chaptered, ship: adam/brad, ship: brad bell/oc

Comments 4

wynkat1313 August 1 2011, 07:22:02 UTC

Oh my gods my heart aches for Kris so damn much! Ugh! Well and Brad too. Not so much for Adam right now, though I still like him. Potent stuff!

robin1961 August 1 2011, 15:32:45 UTC

so intense and complicated .... loving this, Kris needs to open his eyes imo love Adam feel sorry for him being pulled in so many directions. Great job

choose2live August 2 2011, 06:32:18 UTC

So, sadly, my brain's gone too far offline at this point to really say much. But, a few things: I really love the complexity of Kris' emotions, and the way you display all of the emotions involved here (from all the characters). You have a great way of showing a story, instead of telling it - the characters just react like people, instead of being like the watered-down characters you see in so many stories who are reduced to being "sad" or "angry" or "happy".

I'm enjoying Kris' jealousy a bit, even though all his current emotional handicaps aren't at all endearing him to Adam. Conversely, I was curious about Angel's blase attitude towards the idea of Kris and Adam. I get that they aren't serious, but most relationships have an element of possessiveness, so to see Angel (seemingly honestly) not caring how Kris was with Adam surprised me.

Wish I could say more, but I'm falling asleep at my computer. As always loving your characters!

technicolornina August 2 2011, 20:57:15 UTC

Yay! I've been a little bit worried about that, so glad it's working ♥

Angel's attitude will make a lot more sense very shortly. Although it probably also helps that Angel can be a little bit of a jerk, so in this particular case it's safe to say he's probably going for shock value. He's good at that.

Glad you're liking, darling!