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Aug 18, 2006 18:25

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pokemon_sues August 18 2006, 23:32:00 UTC
We get a 360 shot of the circular room.

...Okay. So where is it? I'm not seeing ant 360-degree shot! D:

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x_heartdonor August 19 2006, 00:04:58 UTC
There's a thing called verb tense. STICK WIT' IT!

And, what the hell is Tamberian?

“I coming too.”

What? Back to school? That's kosher with me.

“OK dude I don’t know what you up too but…” “Up too?”

Even the people in the story are noticing the bad grammar!

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ghostgecko August 19 2006, 02:10:42 UTC
If the author is twenty, he's writing this with a crayon on the back of a placemat.

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