[ FILL ] of soul understanding 1/1
anonymous
September 13 2011, 15:36:44 UTC
"Derek," Stiles whines high in his throat, as he tries to catch his breath. "Somebody might see," he warns, though a part of him tells him hysterically that it's rather too late for that. He's wearing only the top half of his uniform rucked around his waist; his shorts and boxers puddled in a heap somewhere on the floor when Derek had tugged them off him in his haste
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Re: [ FILL ] of soul understanding 1/1 mime0_0September 13 2011, 18:32:54 UTC
i loved the style of this. the combination of action and dialogue. as well as the in charceterness, poor scott, it would have been lol hardy had you done a little switch to him being all omgomgomg noooooooooooooo. but i enjoyed reading this prompt
Re: [ FILL ] of soul understanding 1/1 chase_acowSeptember 14 2011, 20:14:13 UTC
I really liked this! I can never pack so much into such a short piece, so I love it when someone else does it so well! I hope you fill more prompts! : )
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the combination of action and dialogue. as well as the in charceterness, poor scott, it would have been lol hardy had you done a little switch to him being all omgomgomg noooooooooooooo.
but i enjoyed reading this prompt
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heheh
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Thank you! I certainly intend to fill more prompts (oh dear, Derek/Stiles seems to have eaten my brain...)
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