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[teevee]

Aine crept towards the door slowly. Her bare feet tip toed along the dusty wooden floor. The hunk of meat dripped up her arm as she held it elevated, watery blood making pink trails to her elbow and seeping into her linen dress. She took the brass knob in her other hand and slowly turned it to keep from letting the door creek. The dog sat there

Comments

[uinda_soibra]

Yay! More writing! So the Muse came back? It's always good to see you working on this, and you already know I like it. :)

[teevee]

i let mike read this this morning and he said "we're defintely not getting a dog now". HAHAHA

i did get a little bit of writing done this weekend. i only wish i had more time and energy. it's depressing.

i'm glad you like it :)

[uinda_soibra]

HAHAHA! Well, I hope you can convince him that a doggie is still a good idea! You don't necessarily have to act out your art. :)

Sometimes time and energy can be in short supply. But at least you got some done.

:)

[teevee]

yeah! i laughed and said "come no, you know how much i love dogs". i honestly don't know where these sick thoughts come from. that's creepy right?

[silke_kitty]

Wow,that is really very vivid!*mew*...I like it...*mew*

[teevee]

i'm glad you like it! :)

i don't get very much feedback on these things when i post them.

[silke_kitty]

Yeah,it's cool....I can picture it very clearly...that's sad not many comment on it,as it is very good...

[teevee]

i don't know what the deal is. i've had a few people volunteer to read both things i'm writing and they either never bother to say anything or they pretty much just say "i like it". i mean, the whole point of letting these people read it was to get some feedback....it's confusing and it hurts my feelings.