Comments | teffy: Jayne/River - Looking for Someone

teffy

Jayne/River - Looking for Someone - R

Nov 24, 2005 20:14

Looking for Someone
Jayne/River
R
River finds Jayne playing his guitar and tells him some things about his future.

This is just a shameless excuse to imagine Jayne playing the guitar ;)

( She's so enthralled by his playing, she almost doesn't notice the whispered rumble of his voice as he sings. )

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literarylemming November 25 2005, 02:41:25 UTC

"More." He gasps. "I need to know. Please...tell me you're their mother."

BAM! Socked me right in the gut.

*SWOON!* God I loved this! Aggh!

*tacklehugs you!*

teffy November 25 2005, 03:16:50 UTC

Doesn't it seem interesting to you that Jayne could probably go from stubborn anger to desperation in a split second like that? *wibbles*

literarylemming November 25 2005, 03:29:28 UTC

He's mercurial. *whimper!*

teffy November 25 2005, 03:32:43 UTC

ohmygoshyes! And his growls are like that too. He has a angry, mean, tough guy growl and a desperate, needy, angsty growl. O_O

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walkwithheroes November 25 2005, 02:55:24 UTC

That was just awesome. Though, i got to ask: will there be a tale to talk about: "You think I owe you somethin', Crazy? You think just 'cause you went and sexed me up real good I gotta put up with your ramblin'?"

teffy November 25 2005, 03:18:13 UTC

Thanks. :)

Hmmm...I don't know if I'd write that. I just wanted to imply that something had happened between them before, and Jayne was trying not to take it to seriously.

ex_samarra November 25 2005, 03:18:53 UTC

*swooon....THUD!*

teffy November 25 2005, 03:33:52 UTC

purpleskyfly November 25 2005, 03:24:22 UTC

If he the one pregnant, cause his mood swing are fast and hard.

BUT I LOVE 'EM. They way he's thinking, brooding to stubborn and anger to desperate need and lovin'.

"More." He gasps. "I need to know. Please...tell me you're their mother."

I love that line, I can picture him sayin' that. I don't know what, but I can and picture grabbing her and holding her. *sigh* This is my favorite fics.

teffy November 25 2005, 03:35:15 UTC

I'm pretty sure Jayne's all confused and angsty because he doesn't know how to deal with what he's feeling.

Thanks for reading and enjoying. :)

purpleskyfly November 27 2005, 02:24:01 UTC

I did enjoy. VERY GOOD. *clap*

I like the raw emotion. *crying* I read it again!

I'm still rather incoherent... kashmir1 November 25 2005, 03:47:24 UTC

OH GOD.

Talk about hitting you in the gut? This fic is the definition of that.

I've read it about eight times now and IT GETS BETTER EVERY TIME.

It makes my chest all achy... But in a good way.

SO SO GOOD.

(would've left a review sooner but internet and power all wonky b/c of snow and wind and cold temps OH YAY)

*memories*

Re: I'm still rather incoherent... teffy November 25 2005, 03:51:42 UTC

Thank you.

It is rather angsty isn't it? Mmm...this pairing is angstastical. :)

Glad you enjoyed it, love.

Re: I'm still rather incoherent... kashmir1 November 25 2005, 04:08:00 UTC

It is but with a hopeful ending. Which is the best kind of angst. (For me anyway lol)

Angstastical is so going to be my new word, btw. ;)

Re: I'm still rather incoherent... teffy November 25 2005, 04:16:29 UTC

Heee!