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Jayne/River - Marks - R

Nov 27, 2005 11:37

Marks
Jayne/River
R

( Jayne glared at her as she moved closer, but she could see his chest rise and fall rapidly with panting breaths. )

Comments 22

lattelady6 November 27 2005, 23:54:59 UTC

I love it...Poor man is in denial.

wolviesrogue November 28 2005, 00:48:03 UTC

Are you trying to make me dissolve into a puddle of angsty-Rayne loving goo! Because if you are it is working! Lol.You write a damn good sexy,angsty Jayne.*sighs*

kashmir1 November 28 2005, 00:49:04 UTC

Between this fic... which GUH and the comment thread between you and Lemming...

I need a cold shower.

*memories*

eustacia_vye28 November 28 2005, 01:11:31 UTC

mmmmmmmmm. more suggestive than visual, but invokes the hotness just as much. I love the ending though. It brings a touch of softness to the story, and makes the inner romantic in me go "Yes! They have a future!"

:)

Amazing darkestscream November 28 2005, 02:52:00 UTC

Well this story definetly made me an uber Rayne loving fan!
Working on my own right now.
Congrats AMAZING writing! Will be back for more