Comments | teffy: C'mon and say it - Jayne/River

teffy

C'mon and say it - Jayne/River - NC-17

Dec 03, 2005 20:05

C'mon and say it
Jayne/River
NC-17
Jayne and River learn some things about each other.

( The sweet gesture isn't lost on him, he just doesn't understand why anyone would want to be gentle with him. )

Comments 14

aliaspiral December 4 2005, 02:27:16 UTC

this was both sweet AND hot, and i love the line about how Jayne isnt going to take it, he was going to make her give herself to him...GUH.

and he comes in his pants. he is that hot for her. *flails*

kashmir1 December 4 2005, 02:41:52 UTC

I have a hair pulling kink.

So, uh, I'm just gonna go... over there and... be alone for a while.

*meep*

sarah_1228 December 4 2005, 02:46:19 UTC

like aliaspiral said sweet and HOT

hope you do a second chapter :)

literarylemming December 4 2005, 02:48:56 UTC

"Oh, baby, you'll get rough." He promises lowly. "Won't take it though. Gonna make you give yourself to me."

*panties melt*

"Duly noted." River wraps her arms and legs around him, burying her face against his chest. "We made a mess."

"Yeah." He grumbles sullenly. "Didn't even get to the nekkid part neither."

*DEAD*

regolithfish December 4 2005, 03:44:44 UTC

*stuttering*

Just...

...WOW...

yeah.