Fic: Juggle

[tehangst]

This is...a weird one.

It just sort of came out, on a random prompt from my juggling balls sitting innocently beside my desk. I'd love constructive crit on it because of its abruptness and weirdness. I'm not sure how other people will take it.

x-posted a bit.

Title: Juggle
Author: tehangst
Website: n/a
Pairing(s): Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG
Warning(s

Comments

[theemdash]

Wow. That's really awesome. It doesn't feel abrupt or weird at all. It's well paced, even toned, and such a perfect build. This is really beautiful.

I'll be saving this to read again. ;)

[tigtogtag]

Ahhhhh.

Oh god, I loved it. For some reason I find the whole Christmas Stocking scene perfect. And the whole image of Sirius with that grin on his face. And how both of them, no matter what's happened to them, will always love each other in one way or another.

And...because I am Sirius Serious Denial about the...Incident...I hope Remus won't have to be crying for long. Tonks can't be a good lover. No siree.

Strangely enough, my image of the whole thing is completely in black and white...except for the oranges...and the orange mess...Oh gods, now I want some. XP

[wedowedo]

I'm not crying, oh no, I'm laughing, which (for me) could be almost the same thing as crying. You sent me into a strange emotional blob. I'm being incoherent. I loved it. I squished my cat. OMG. AHH!

Beautiful, really.

[silent_cynic]

Made me teary-eyed. So filled with anguish- Remus I mean. I hate the way things turned out, I absolutely hate it. Stupid cannon, stupid author JKR.

[yue_d]

Simply gorgeous.......I......oh dear, i'm quite misty at this point...

*wipes eyes and coughs*

Well it was beautifully written ~ What you believe to be "abruptness" works well with the pacing of the story's "episode format". Wonderful, heartbreaking and real. Kudos to you love ~