Comments | tehjessica: No Rest at the Bed & Breakfast, A Supernatural Fanfic for the Dean-focused h/c fic Challenge #6

tehjessica

No Rest at the Bed & Breakfast, A Supernatural Fanfic for the Dean-focused h/c fic Challenge #6

Mar 14, 2012 20:22

Title: No Rest at the Bed & Breakfast
Author: tehjessica
Characters: Dean, Sam, Castiel (kind of!), OFC
Genre/pairing: Gen
Rating: PG
Word-count: 8,972
Spoilers: All seasons, through 7.10, "Death's Door."
Warnings: None
Summary: After Bobby's death, Sam and Dean commandeer the nearest car and drive until they can't drive anymore. They stop at a Bed and ( Read more... )

my fic, sam winchester, dean winchester, supernatural, dean-focused h/c fic challenge

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tehjessica March 15 2012, 11:49:19 UTC

Thank you! I know it isn't something show has gone into too much, so I kind of wanted to explore that a little more.

Just the way I like it! ;) These poor boys, all they have is each other now...

maypoles March 15 2012, 04:12:29 UTC

Awesome take on the prompt! I really felt their exhaustion, reading this, and the h/c was delicious. ;)

tehjessica March 15 2012, 11:50:30 UTC

Thank you very much and thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

ext_1105860 March 15 2012, 19:24:46 UTC

Jessica, you can be proud of yourself and tell everyone around that you have taken my "fanfic virginity" :D And what an experience that one was! I really enjoyed it! It took me less than an hour (interruptions by family members aside LOL) and I was literally hooked! You captured their characters mighty fine! I could visualize them and believe that they would actually say these things. I loved that you explored their psyche and that we got to see their emotions. You know, as good as an actor can be and convey feelings through the screen, it's not the same with words. Things are always being left out, whether it be a show or a movie. It had balanced proportions of adventure, humour and emotion and I couldn't wait to see what lies ahead. Loved the brothers' bantering. Inspiring way to open and finish your story and I loved certain phrases, like "They were young, but their eyes were old". I'm sure there are more things to say, but I think you got the picture. You have quite an imagination girl, so if you have more fics, keep them flowing ( ... )

tehjessica March 15 2012, 21:50:01 UTC

I know I already said it, but thank you so much Lina!!! I was all smiles all afternoon. :D I'm glad that you think I got their characters down.

I really wanted to explore more of what they were feeling after all their loss this season. The show has touched on it a little, and I think it'd be soapy if they focused on it too much, but it was fun to get into their headspaces a little bit.

Thank you sooo much!!! I'll do my best to continue writing. Encouragement likes yours is worth a lot and definitely does inspire me! *hugs*

katiki7 March 16 2012, 03:15:48 UTC

Poor boys, they can't even get a nice restful night at a B&B! Well, at least they did at the end. Loved your OC, and also how you dealt with their grief and where they were at emotionally.

tehjessica March 16 2012, 11:46:26 UTC

Aww I know! The universe won't leave them alone! Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I really wanted to explore their emotions and I'm glad that came across well. :)

jaimeykay March 19 2012, 05:29:34 UTC

Aw, so nice! I liked the whole flashback to s1-s2ish with the hunt and all. And your OC Margaret was so lovely too :)

tehjessica March 20 2012, 00:20:27 UTC

Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much as well for all your support and encouragement, I don't know if this would have happened without you, so thank you! :)